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15. Describe a friend who is a good leader

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To be honest, I feel fortunate about all my friend relationships since they all are good partners and one of them even is a good leader. Let's kick off by sharing about her and her life. First, I’m going to talk about who this person is. She was a student in my high school, my predecessor well I think she’s 19 years old now. She was known as a busy-bee but has always been a beacon of light not just for her talent but also for her great passion for the work that she has committed to. I suppose that she has all the qualities needed to be a good leader. I met her when I took part in my debate school club which was led by her. Actually, the first time I talked to her, she was not attractive and impressed in my eyes since she rarely spoke in public. In fact, she is taciturn and has a very good sense of humour though she’s quite stern. However, her behavior and how she treated others made me understand why she was chosen to be a president in the club. She has no glossophobia and every year she used to represent the school for debates and declamation contests, and she won many trophies for the school. She assisted all members, trained us and supported us with all her heart. Whenever she talks on any subject, she speaks so well that people listen to him. She can bind his audience very well. I realize that though she didn’t talk too much, she knew everythings about us and always tried to help us in silence. I really keen on spending time to work with her
To be honest, I feel fortunate about all my friend relationships since they all are
good
partners and one of them even is a
good
leader.
Let
's kick off by sharing about her and her life.
First
, I’m going to talk about
who
this person is.
She
was a student in my high
school
, my predecessor well I
think
she’s
19 years
old
now
.
She
was known
as a busy-bee
but
has always been a beacon of light not
just
for her talent
but
also
for her great passion for the work that
she
has committed to. I suppose that
she
has all the qualities needed to be a
good
leader. I met her when I
took part
in my debate
school
club which
was led
by her. Actually, the
first
time I talked to her,
she
was not attractive and impressed in my eyes since
she
rarely spoke in public. In fact,
she
is taciturn and has a
very
good
sense of
humour
though
she’s
quite stern.
However
, her behavior and how
she
treated others made me understand why
she
was chosen
to be a president in the club.
She
has no
glossophobia
and every year
she
used
to represent the
school
for debates and declamation contests, and
she
won
many
trophies for the
school
.
She
assisted all members, trained us and supported us with all her heart. Whenever
she
talks on any subject,
she
speaks
so
well that
people
listen to him.
She
can bind his audience
very
well. I realize that though
she
didn’t talk too much,
she
knew
everythings
about us and always tried to
help
us in silence. I
really
keen on spending time to work with
her
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