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Asking for advice from a friend

Dear Diana, I'm writing to ask if you could help me with the choice of the course, which is situated in a city where you live. I would appreciate if you could help me with my problem of studying for the second specialist. As you know I have been working in the sales company for the last six years but I'm not satisfied with my salary. Recently I've heard that if I could speak any other foreign languages I would be payed twice. I would be grateful if you could offer your advice on online foreign language courses which are very effective. What do you think about that case? Will it be useful for me to attend on that course? Which one is more effective? The next thing I want to ask you is that if you can manage to find the phone number of that head teacher who is making those courses. Thak you for taking the time to read the letter. I understand that you're a busy person and again thanks in advance. I look forward to receiving a massage from you. Love, John.
Dear Diana, I'm writing to ask if you could
help
me with the choice of the course, which
is situated
in a city where you
live
. I would appreciate if you could
help
me with my problem of studying for the second specialist. As you know I have been working in the sales
company
for the last six years
but
I'm not satisfied with my salary. Recently I've heard that if I could speak any other foreign languages I would be
payed
twice. I would be grateful if you could offer your advice on online foreign language courses which are
very
effective. What do you
think
about that case? Will it be useful for me to attend on that course? Which one is more effective? The
next
thing I want to ask you is that if you can manage to find the phone number of that head teacher who is making those courses.
Thak
you for taking the time to read the letter. I understand that you're a busy person and again thanks in advance. I look forward to receiving a massage from you.
Love
, John.

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