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Some people think that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals other think that negative. Discuss both view and opinion

Due to the commercial era, the number of companies are promote their products by advertising. Certain masses believe that it has positve effect but some are against it. I strongly agree the formal notion. it has the reason behind this, up to date. However it is the bad effects are develop rumors. The first noteworthy aspect is that people cannot enhance their knowledge about product unless better sources. To clear that, when companies lunched their products then they published to it in front of the mankind through aids which is the main cause Create awareness realted to things and it has the good impact on human life. for example, few years ago one copmanies made a vaccum cleaner which had the highest sale rate in last year and it has the main reason had been aids. hence the reason why it is positive for human. On the other hand, since the trend of advertising has increased, rumors are also becoming concering issue. To elaborate, no one can deny most of the aids create rumors among individuals which are give the birth to many problems in society and human life. for instance, owing to the corona epidemic diseases number of people did suffer with fake news which are 65 % responsible for this diseases. there the nagative side of advertising. To conclude, in terms of advertisements has the good effects which give the useful information to masses and it neglect to the disadvantages of advertising
Due to the commercial era, the number of
companies
are
promote
their products by advertising. Certain masses believe that it has
positve
effect
but
some
are against it. I
strongly
agree
the formal notion.
it
has the reason behind this, up to date.
However
it is the
bad
effects are develop rumors. The
first
noteworthy aspect is that
people
cannot enhance their knowledge about product unless better sources. To
clear
that, when
companies
lunched their products then they published to it in front of the mankind through aids which is the main cause Create awareness
realted
to things and it has the
good
impact on human life.
for
example, few years ago one
copmanies
made a
vaccum
cleaner which had the highest sale rate in last year and it has the main reason had been aids.
hence
the reason why it is
positive
for human.
On the other hand
, since the trend of advertising has increased, rumors are
also
becoming
concering
issue. To elaborate, no one can deny most of the aids create rumors among individuals which are give the birth to
many
problems in society and human life.
for
instance, owing to the corona epidemic diseases number of
people
did suffer with fake news which are 65 % responsible for
this
diseases.
there
the
nagative
side of advertising.
To conclude
, in terms of advertisements has the
good
effects which give the useful information to masses and it
neglect
to the disadvantages of
advertising

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