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You have a friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this friend to visit you. In your letter: invite him/her to a public event in your country describe the public event explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit

You have a friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this friend to visit you. In your letter: invite him/her to a public event in your country describe the public event explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit g1157
Dear Jerry, I hope you and your family are hale and hearty, and you're enjoying your work at the same time. I want to invite you to my country's Armed Force Rememberance Day (AFRD), I hope you'll find time from your busy schedule to honour my invitation. Armed Force Remember Day (AFRD) is a day set-aside by my country to honour past and present military officers to encourage them to keep rendering selfless services to the nation. The event will be held on February 22, 2022, at the national stadium Abuja. It starts with a minute silent as a respect to officers lost in the course of duty. After that, there will be parade by both military and paramilitary personnel. Once that is done, the president will address the congregation and release 3 caged white doves as a symbol of peace and unity. I know you have several unpaid holiday, so, this is the right time to take it. I will make sure your visit is memorable as I have several activities planned for you after the event. The first on my list is a visit to the Nike lake for a boat ride, after that, we'll visit the state zoo. I know how much you love animals, so it'll be a wonderful experience. Then, I'll take you to the National War Museum in Umuahia for sightseeing. I can't wait to see you once again, I'm wish you safe trip in advance. Best wishes, Jay
Dear Jerry, I hope you and your family are hale and hearty, and you're enjoying your work at the same time. I want to invite you to my country's Armed Force
Rememberance
Day (
AFRD
), I hope you'll find time from your busy schedule to
honour
my invitation. Armed Force Remember Day (
AFRD
) is a day set-aside by my country to
honour
past and present military officers to encourage them to
keep
rendering selfless services to the nation. The
event
will
be held
on February 22, 2022, at the national stadium Abuja. It
starts
with a minute silent as a respect to officers lost in the course of duty. After that, there will be parade by both military and paramilitary personnel. Once that
is done
, the president will address the congregation and release 3 caged white doves as a symbol of peace and unity. I know you have several unpaid holiday,
so
, this is the right time to take it. I will
make
sure your visit is memorable as I have several activities planned for you after the
event
. The
first
on my list is a visit to the Nike lake for a boat ride, after that, we'll visit the state zoo. I know how much you
love
animals,
so
it'll be a wonderful experience. Then, I'll take you to the National War Museum in
Umuahia
for sightseeing. I can't wait to
see
you once again, I'm wish you safe trip in advance. Best wishes, Jay
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