Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts, and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think that there is a better way to spend it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts, and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think that there is a better way to spend it.  Goo2o
Nowadays, plenty of people tend to spend a large part of their budget on beauty salons, cosmetics and fashion in chase of perfection. Thus, there is an opinion that it is the preferable way to deal with finances. Meanwhile, some people argue that there are better options for wasting money. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and then give my own opinion on the matter.
First, some people assume that person’s appearance is very important for a successful life in modern reality that is why investing money in it might be considered a valuable asset. Especially this is true for women due to the fact that society still pushes them to get married at an early age and in spite of body positive movement there are still high beauty standards and pressure from the masses on how somebody should look like. For example, people would treat them with more respect if someone was wearing an expensive suit, a brand wristwatch and had a fresh modern haircut.
However, on another side of the argument are those who believe that there are much more important areas of our lives that needed properly funded. The supporters of this point of view might argue that spending money on the beauty industry will not bring any happiness to a person who is doing it. However, investing money in charity, travel and social projects will bring a personal sense of fulfilment and satisfaction. For instance, one of my friends in chase of beauty and trying pleased surrounding people used to waste loads of money on cloth and different cosmetic procedures. However, she stayed unhappy until the moment she started to support a local dog’s shelter.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, however, I believe that taking care of someone’s appearance is a good way of spending money, meanwhile, it should not become an obsession and a person should not forget there are other aspects of life. In the end, love, compassion, friendship and mutual help are more important than somebody’s look. 
Nowadays, 
plenty
 of 
people
 tend to spend a large part of their budget on 
beauty
 salons, cosmetics and fashion in chase of perfection. 
Thus
, there is an opinion that it is the preferable way to deal with finances. Meanwhile, 
some
 people
 argue that there are better options for wasting 
money
. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and then give my 
own
 opinion on the matter.
First
, 
some
 people
 assume that person’s appearance is 
very
 important
 for a successful life in modern reality 
that is
 why investing 
money
 in it might 
be considered
 a valuable asset. 
Especially
 this is true for women due to the fact that society 
still
 pushes them to 
get
 married at an early age and 
in spite of
 body 
positive
 movement there are 
still
 high 
beauty
 standards and pressure from the masses on how somebody should look like. 
For example
, 
people
 would treat them with more respect if someone was wearing an expensive suit, a brand wristwatch and had a fresh modern haircut.
However
, on another side of the argument are those who believe that there are much more 
important
 areas of our 
lives
 that needed 
properly
 funded. The supporters of this point of view might argue that spending 
money
 on the 
beauty
 industry will not bring any happiness to a person who is doing it. 
However
, investing 
money
 in charity, travel and social projects will bring a personal sense of 
fulfilment
 and satisfaction. 
For instance
, one of my friends in chase of 
beauty
 and trying 
pleased
 surrounding 
people
 used
 to waste loads of 
money
 on cloth and 
different
 cosmetic procedures. 
However
, she stayed unhappy until the moment she 
started
 to support a local dog’s shelter.
In conclusion
, both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, 
however
, I believe that taking care of someone’s appearance is a 
good
 way of spending 
money
, meanwhile, it should not become an obsession and a person should not forget there are other aspects of life. In the 
end
, 
love
, compassion, friendship and mutual 
help
 are more 
important
 than somebody’s look. 
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