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The risky incident I used to go through.

The risky incident I used to go through. Egmbq
As far as we know, risky things are necessary parts of our lives. They help us to learn new experiences, lessons, also make our world more interesting. I’ve been through a lot of risks, but the risk that I remember clearly is the day when I found the way to my first part-time job place in a new city. So today I would love to tell you about this risky experience. 1 year ago, I was a freshman at Can Tho University. I had just gone to this city to study, so everything around me was so strange and challenging. At that time, my family’s finance wasn’t fine, so I decided to find a part-time job to help my parents. My first job was a shop assistant at a small milk shop at Nguyen Thi Minh Khai street. At first, it was difficult for me to know the way to find this shop because Can Thơ’s streets were not familiar to me, and the traffic was so crowded. On the streets, there were a lot of signs to notice and many shops, stores, . . . Even though the road I needed to look for was not far, I still felt nervous and alone to direct đơ ret exactly my position. Initially, I tried to use Google Map, but I still got lost and I had to ride my motorbike around and around. I was really afraid of being late. Ultimately, I stopped at the curb to asked a woman where the street was. Then I opened the app again and endeavored to be calm to ride my motorbike. After I went to Xuan Khanh market, I crossed a bridge and continued running for about 3 minutes until I saw the right place. That risky time made me shiver, and sometimes I thought it was better to go back, but eventually, I didn’t give up. Now, I no longer work as a shop assistant because I perceived that job was so occupied. I moved to another job near my boarding house as a photographer. Due to Covid 19 pandemic, I have resigned since February. I think I should spend more time studying well instead of doing other things. However, I will always remember this risk as a memorable moment in my independent life.
As far as we know, risky things are necessary parts of our
lives
. They
help
us to learn new experiences, lessons,
also
make
our world more interesting. I’ve been through
a lot of
risks
,
but
the
risk
that I remember
clearly
is the day when I found the way to my
first
part-time
job
place in a new city.
So
today
I would
love
to
tell
you about this risky experience. 1 year ago, I was a freshman at Can Tho University. I had
just
gone to this city to study,
so
everything around me was
so
strange and challenging. At that time, my family’s finance wasn’t fine,
so
I decided to find a part-time
job
to
help
my parents. My
first
job
was a
shop
assistant at a
small
milk
shop
at Nguyen
Thi
Minh
Khai
street
. At
first
, it was difficult for me to know the way to find this
shop
because
Can
Thơ
’s
streets
were not familiar to me, and the traffic was
so
crowded. On the
streets
, there were
a lot of
signs to notice and
many
shops
, stores
, .
.
.
Even though
the road I needed to look for was not far, I
still
felt nervous and alone to direct
đơ
ret
exactly my position.
Initially
, I tried to
use
Google Map,
but
I
still
got
lost
and
I had to ride my motorbike around and around. I was
really
afraid of being late.
Ultimately
, I
stopped
at the curb to
asked
a woman where the
street
was. Then I opened the app again and endeavored to be calm to ride my motorbike. After I went to Xuan
Khanh
market, I crossed a bridge and continued running for about 3 minutes until I
saw
the right place. That risky time made me shiver, and
sometimes
I
thought
it was better to go back,
but
eventually
, I didn’t give up.
Now
, I no longer work as a
shop
assistant
because
I perceived that
job
was
so
occupied. I
moved
to another
job
near my boarding
house
as a photographer. Due to
Covid 19
pandemic, I have resigned since February. I
think
I should spend more time studying well
instead
of doing other things.
However
, I will always remember this
risk
as a memorable moment in my independent life.
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