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the racism and inequality ingrained in our society shown through the study of jasper jones

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Storytelling has been giving the reader questions to contemplate since its beginning, making us question the way society has been built and the values of which it is built upon - whether these rules should be followed so blindly and just how right they are. Craig Silvey’s Jasper Jones was published in 2009 as a coming of age/gothic fiction novel. Jasper Jones has challenged my acceptance of these rules which are thought to keep us equal and in order, yet they have ingrained racism and inequality deep into our society. Following my in-depth study of Craig Silvey’s Jasper Jones and the era, it was set in (the 1960s). Known as the time Australia was becoming more progressive. I have realised that due to the way people think and act as a collective after being raised on bigoted views and ideologies. That these rules our society is built on have ingrained racism and inequality instead of trying to remove it. Scapegoating has been in our society for a long time, especially towards minorities this wrongful act is displayed in jasper jones. Craig Silvey positions the modern audience to interpret the racist remarks and scapegoating of Jasper Jones as an insight into the unrightful blame of minorities in our society today and the grandfathered-in ideology. Shows that Corrigan scapegoats Jasper Jones and allows it to happen because he is aboriginal and makes the audience think about how this happens in our modern society and about how we think as a collective. Using a semantic field while describing Jasper as “a Thief, a Liar, a Thug, a Truant. He’s lazy and unreliable. ” Silvey pushes the audience to understand that jasper is deeply hated. Although none of this is true it still happens because he's aboriginal and nobody cares what will happen to him. This reflects the inequality in our society where we will collectively blame people if it makes our lives easier. The ruthless scapegoating of this aboriginal child is a clear example of the way our society wrongfully blames minorities for their own actions. Old ideologies in our society that have been passed down have created deep-rooted racism and have not helped remove it. Silvey makes this clear to the reader by using the bullying of Jeffery Lu as an example. Jeffery despite being an exceptional cricket player is tormented by the team. They push him around and say a multitude of racist things like “fuck off cong” and go as far as to hit his ball away until eventually “it’s a lost ball” they hit his ball so far they lost it. All because Jeffery’s Vietnamese. Back in the 1960s when Jasper Jones was set, the Vietnam war was going on. This made every and any Vietnamese person an enemy in a lot of people's eyes, even a scrawny little 12-year-old boy. This collective hate for Vietnam in not only the 1960s but in our modern world has made a racist country and a racist society. The audience has had it spelled out that the reason all this is happening is Jeffery is Vietnamese. Even though the modern audience knows it's wrong and the people in Corrigan do too they do it anyway. Society lets them because long ago the Vietnamese used to be our enemies in a war. they will always be treated differently because of that. This urges the audience to think about how we treat minorities today and how unequal things still are. Through the use of the hate towards Vietnamese people in Jasper Jones, the purpose of this argument is to make the audience realise what our old ideologies have done to our society. To understand that just because we follow them, doesn't mean that they will stop things like racism. As a society, some discriminative actions and mindsets have become the norm due to being done repeatedly over the years. Overall society tolerates them because we all aspect someone else to deal with it. This negative collective way of thinking causes racism and inequality to stay in our society and examples of this are outlined in Jasper Jones. An Lu is beaten by a few men in the town being called “red rat” over and over and they eventually say “there are rats here and they’re breedin. ” An was spit on and beat to the ground because they like many others in our society saw Vietnamese people as less than human. Because society tolerates it these men didn't get any legal punishment, the cops don’t care if a Vietnamese man got beat up. Society displays this idea of people collectively tolerating things like racism and thinking someone else will handle it. That stands out to the audience when they read about An getting beat senseless and the men responsible had no punishment for it other than a few punches from An’s neighbours. It leaves the reader with a bitter taste in their mouth that we let this type of thing happen in our own world. Just because something bad doesn't directly affect us doesn't mean we can just let it happen. Society has been allowing racism and inequality to slide by because it's more convenient than dealing with it. Jasper Jones changed the way I think about society through the abuse of some of its characters and how the town reacted. I now understand that Australia did not really grow up in the 1960’s it did not become more progressive deep down in our society not much has changed people are still racist every day because they know there will be no punishment. We tolerate abuse and inequality and Jasper Jones has helped outline that fact.
Storytelling has been giving the reader questions to contemplate since its beginning, making us question the way
society
has
been built
and the values of which it
is built
upon
-
whether these
rules
should
be followed
so
blindly
and
just
how right they are. Craig
Silvey
’s Jasper
Jones
was published
in 2009 as a coming of age/
gothic
fiction novel. Jasper
Jones
has challenged my acceptance of these
rules
which are
thought
to
keep
us equal and in order,
yet
they have ingrained
racism
and
inequality
deep into our
society
. Following my in-depth study of Craig
Silvey
’s Jasper
Jones
and the era, it
was set
in (the 1960s). Known as the time Australia was becoming more progressive. I have
realised
that due to the way
people
think
and act as a
collective
after
being raised
on bigoted views and
ideologies
. That these
rules
our
society
is built
on have ingrained
racism
and
inequality
instead
of trying to remove it. Scapegoating has been in our
society
for a long time,
especially
towards
minorities
this wrongful act
is
displayed in jasper
jones
. Craig
Silvey
positions the
modern
audience
to interpret the
racist
remarks and scapegoating of Jasper
Jones
as an insight into the
unrightful
blame of
minorities
in our
society
today
and the grandfathered-in
ideology
.
Shows
that
Corrigan
scapegoats Jasper
Jones
and
allows
it to
happen
because
he is aboriginal and
makes
the
audience
think
about how this
happens
in our
modern
society
and about how we
think
as a
collective
. Using a semantic field while describing Jasper as “a Thief, a Liar, a Thug, a Truant. He’s lazy and unreliable. ”
Silvey
pushes the
audience
to understand that jasper is
deeply
hated. Although none of this is true it
still
happens
because
he's aboriginal and nobody cares what will
happen
to him. This reflects the
inequality
in our
society
where we will
collectively
blame
people
if it
makes
our
lives
easier. The ruthless scapegoating of this aboriginal child is a
clear
example of the way our
society
wrongfully
blames
minorities
for their
own
actions.
Old
ideologies
in our
society
that have
been passed
down have created deep-rooted
racism
and have not
helped
remove it.
Silvey
makes
this
clear
to the reader by using the bullying of Jeffery Lu as an example. Jeffery despite being an exceptional cricket player
is tormented
by the team. They push him around and say a multitude of
racist
things like “
fuck
off
cong
” and go as far as to hit his ball away until
eventually
“it’s a lost ball” they hit his ball
so
far they lost it. All
because
Jeffery’s Vietnamese. Back in the 1960s when Jasper
Jones
was set
, the
Vietnam war
was going on. This made every and any Vietnamese person an enemy in
a lot of
people
's eyes, even a scrawny
little
12-year-
old
boy. This
collective
hate for Vietnam in not
only
the 1960s
but
in our
modern
world has made a
racist
country and a
racist
society
. The
audience
has had it spelled out that the reason all this is happening is Jeffery is Vietnamese.
Even though
the
modern
audience
knows it's
wrong
and the
people
in
Corrigan
do too they do it anyway.
Society
lets
them
because
long ago the Vietnamese
used
to be our enemies in a war.
they
will always
be treated
differently
because
of that. This urges the
audience
to
think
about how we treat
minorities
today
and how unequal things
still
are. Through the
use
of the hate towards Vietnamese
people
in Jasper
Jones
, the purpose of this argument is to
make
the
audience
realise
what our
old
ideologies
have done to our
society
. To understand that
just
because
we follow them, doesn't mean that they will
stop
things like racism. As a
society
,
some
discriminative actions and mindsets have become the norm due to
being done
repeatedly
over the years.
Overall
society
tolerates them
because
we all aspect someone else to deal with it. This
negative
collective
way of thinking causes
racism
and
inequality
to stay in our
society
and examples of this
are outlined
in Jasper
Jones
.
An
Lu
is beaten
by a few
men
in the town
being called
“red rat” over and over
and
they
eventually
say “there are rats here
and
they’re
breedin
. ”
An
was spit
on and beat to the ground
because
they like
many
others in our
society
saw
Vietnamese
people
as less than human.
Because
society
tolerates it these
men
didn't
get
any legal punishment, the cops don’t care if a Vietnamese
man
got
beat up.
Society
displays this
idea
of
people
collectively
tolerating things like
racism
and thinking someone else will handle it. That stands out to the
audience
when they read about An getting beat senseless and the
men
responsible had no punishment for it other than a few punches from An’s
neighbours
. It
leaves
the reader with a bitter taste in their mouth that we
let
this type of thing
happen
in our
own
world.
Just
because
something
bad
doesn't
directly
affect us doesn't mean we can
just
let
it
happen
.
Society
has been allowing
racism
and
inequality
to slide by
because
it's more convenient than dealing with it. Jasper
Jones
changed
the way I
think
about
society
through the abuse of
some
of its characters and how the town reacted. I
now
understand that Australia did not
really
grow up in the
1960’s
it did not become more progressive deep down in our
society
not much has
changed
people
are
still
racist
every day
because
they know there will be no punishment. We tolerate abuse and
inequality
and Jasper
Jones
has
helped
outline that fact.
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