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The process of making honey

The process of making honey WwK
The picture depicts the process of making honey by bees. It contains 7 stages of great importance from building a container where honey has to be kept to filling in jars with honey.  First of all, as was mentioned, bees have to build a container (which named "hive") where afterwards they will keep nectar. A hive is composed of octagon built cells. Then bees leave their hive and go to search for suitable flowers for picking up nectar. After getting it, they bring it back to a hive where the process begins.  In order to get honey bees have to cool down nectar by removing all water from it. This process is very captivating since they fan nectar by working their wings and creating air-rotation. As a result, nectar loses all water substances and honey is ready to be used.
The picture depicts the process of making honey by bees. It contains 7 stages of great importance from building a container where honey
has to
be
kept
to filling in jars with honey.  
First of all
, as
was mentioned
, bees
have to
build a container (which named
"
hive
"
) where afterwards they will
keep
nectar
. A hive
is composed
of octagon built cells. Then bees
leave
their hive and go to search for suitable flowers for picking up
nectar
. After getting it, they bring it back to a hive where the process
begins
.  In order to
get
honey bees
have to
cool down
nectar
by removing all water from it. This process is
very
captivating since they fan
nectar
by working their wings and creating air-rotation.
As a result
,
nectar
loses all water substances and honey is ready to be
used
.
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IELTS essay The process of making honey

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