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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. neVan
Over the last century, the tendency of use car ownership increased in recent years globally. As reported in 2000 the number of cars uses to be around 29 million, from the first time cars appeared in 1888 on British roads. and in 2010 autoward. com reported that the number of cars use in the world had reached more than 1 billion units. The leading cause of increasing use of cars According to them, using a privat car seems more flexible, efficient and easy to go from one place to another place, compared to public transportation which seems longer, and inefficient because poor quality of public transport, the physical condition of the vehicle that is no longer roadworthy, too many stops along its route, and sometimes that's what makes people feel annoyed, especially if he's in a hurry. Therefore, the use of private cars increased quickly. However, the huge increase in the number of cars on the street has caused several major concerns, one of them is traffic jams due to the large number of cars that fill the road, and It is unavoidable that the gas emitted from millions of cars causes a lot of environmental problems and air pollution. I totally agree that there should be a policy to control the ownership and use of cars. First, must have conditions that must be met before buying a car, such as having to show proof of ownership of a parking space and must also apply a progressive vehicle tax, for people who own more than one vehicle or a vehicle that is more than 5 years old. as applied by Japan. To reduce car use, Japanese citizens must submit a proof of parking form before purchasing a car, as proof that their car has a place to store it. and applied the high cost of parking and fuel there. So don't be surprised if then many Japanese people prefer to use public transportation. Second, should encourage alternative forms of transportation such as trains, buses, trams at low prices. and the start of implementing the use of bicycles as an environmentally friendly means of transportation. Besides being able to reduce air pollution, cycling also has health benefits for the body, such as maintaining heart health, Reduce the risk of depression, lose weight etc. The use of bicycles as a means of transportation has also been applied in Amsterdam, even Amsterdam has been nicknamed ''a city of cycles'' due to the introduction of cycling since ancient times In conclusion, at first that the government ought to restricted the ownership of car, then that the use of different transportation, this should be encouraged to reduce air pollution and traffic problems.
Over the last century, the tendency of
use
car
ownership
increased in recent years globally. As reported in 2000 the
number
of
cars
uses
to be around 29 million, from the
first
time
cars
appeared in 1888 on British roads.
and
in 2010
autoward
.
com
reported that the
number
of
cars
use
in the world had reached more than 1 billion units. The leading cause of increasing
use
of
cars
According to them, using a
privat
car
seems more flexible, efficient and easy to go from one place to another place, compared to public
transportation
which seems longer, and inefficient
because
poor quality of public transport, the physical condition of the
vehicle
that is
no longer roadworthy, too
many
stops
along its route, and
sometimes
that's what
makes
people
feel annoyed,
especially
if he's in a hurry.
Therefore
, the
use
of private
cars
increased
quickly
.
However
, the huge increase in the
number
of
cars
on the street has caused several major concerns, one of them is traffic jams due to the large
number
of
cars
that fill the road, and It is unavoidable that the gas emitted from millions of
cars
causes
a lot of
environmental problems and air pollution. I
totally
agree
that there should be a policy to control the
ownership
and
use
of cars.
First
,
must
have conditions that
must
be met
before
buying a
car
, such as having to
show
proof of
ownership
of a parking space and
must
also
apply a progressive
vehicle
tax, for
people
who
own
more than one
vehicle
or a
vehicle
that is
more than 5 years
old
.
as
applied by Japan. To
reduce
car
use
, Japanese citizens
must
submit a proof of parking form
before
purchasing a
car
, as proof that their
car
has a place to store it. and applied the high cost of parking and fuel there.
So
don't
be surprised
if then
many
Japanese
people
prefer to
use
public transportation. Second, should encourage alternative forms of
transportation
such as trains, buses, trams at low prices.
and
the
start
of implementing the
use
of bicycles as an
environmentally
friendly means of
transportation
.
Besides
being able to
reduce
air pollution, cycling
also
has health benefits for the body, such as maintaining heart health,
Reduce
the
risk
of depression, lose weight etc. The
use
of bicycles as a means of
transportation
has
also
been applied
in Amsterdam, even Amsterdam has
been nicknamed
''a city of cycles'' due to the introduction of cycling since ancient times
In conclusion
, at
first
that the
government
ought
to restricted
the
ownership
of
car
, then that the
use
of
different
transportation
, this should
be encouraged
to
reduce
air pollution and traffic problems.
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