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Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to gat a university education. Some people believw that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to gat a university education. Some people believw that universities should help them. 5xneV
It is frequently argued that pupils from poor homes and those who reside in villages find it hard to get a tertiary education, while others suggest that universities should assist them. Personally, I completely agree with the latter point of view, as I believe that when there is creation of awareness and giving of scholarship, admission would be achieved. On the one hand, creating of awareness and sensitization can be paramount in the rural area to get admitted into a higher institute. This is due to the fact that it will enable the students to be informed of various institution in their country and help them know the required band scores allocated to several courses, the money involved, the various ways of entry and years given to each department. Taking Nigeria, as an example, people who stay in the village are aware of several academies, due to sensitization done by considerable expertise in the field. In addition, this can make them to study appropriately and get into the academy despite not having enough funds. Furthermore, awarding scholarship programmes can be effective. The particular reason for this is that it will help them engage in these activities and try their optimal best to get into college. Moreover, it is normally graded by scores, so they will put in their best effort, since they know they can not afford to get admitted due to funds. This can change their life completely for the best. According to a recent survey, giving out free admissions to the disadvantaged families has helped about 80% of Individuals go to college. In conclusion, I strongly approve that free education and informing individuals about it, can assist disadvantaged families to go to school. It is highly recommended that the government should approve money for these programmes.
It is
frequently
argued that pupils from poor homes and those who reside in villages find it
hard
to
get
a tertiary education, while others suggest that universities should assist them.
Personally
, I completely
agree
with the latter point of view, as I believe that when there is creation of awareness and giving of scholarship, admission would
be achieved
. On the one hand, creating of awareness and sensitization can be paramount in the rural area to
get
admitted into a higher institute.
This is due to the fact that
it will enable the students to
be informed
of various institution in their country and
help
them know the required band scores allocated to several courses, the money involved, the various ways of entry and years
given
to each department. Taking Nigeria, as an example,
people
who stay in the village are aware of several academies, due to sensitization done by considerable expertise in the field.
In addition
, this can
make
them to study
appropriately
and
get
into the academy despite not having
enough
funds.
Furthermore
, awarding scholarship
programmes
can be effective. The particular reason for this is that it will
help
them engage in these activities and try their optimal best to
get
into college.
Moreover
, it is
normally
graded by scores,
so
they will put in their best effort, since they know they can not afford to
get
admitted due to funds. This can
change
their
life
completely for the best. According to a recent survey, giving out free admissions to the disadvantaged families has
helped
about 80% of Individuals go to college.
In conclusion
, I
strongly
approve that free education and informing individuals about it, can assist disadvantaged families to go to school. It is
highly
recommended that the
government
should approve money for these
programmes
.
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