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Today every place is becoming identical

Today every place is becoming identical JP79w
Over the course of human history, various migrations and sea voyages have taken place in order to find lands anew and different from one's homeland and it continues even today. But, with the advent of globalisation, the experience of travelling to new places is no longer the same, both on a positive and negative side, about which we will discuss in the ensuing paragraphs. Firstly, globalisation has to play the most considerable role in the increasing similarities of sceneries in places around the world. With it, came the numerous companies and brands, which before used to be limited to a certain geographical area in terms of functioning, like internationally popular fast food joints of McDonald's, Kentucky Fried Chicken to name a few and fashion brands like Versace, Monet and many more. They are the most popular in the public domain and an international expanse of these companies to various countries, may it be developing or developed, just makes them more readily and easily availaible to people around the world. Secondly, the ever-growing technology of the internet and mobile phones has connected the world in a way never imagined before. Nowadays, one can surf the internet and can see and know all about the country they admire, may it be about the culture there or popular tourist destinations or even local specialties. Internet is almost accesible to everybody around the world and is reaching the corners, where it has not and is making cross-culture exchange stronger. However, some people believe that these growing similarities are slowly killing the diversity of most places. Each destination once used to have its own unique set of traditions, customs, social exchanges but now with such similarities to be found at all places around the world- it has given the world a certain monotone and at extents, it may seem also seem like everything has been generalised and this sounds daunting to a certain set individuals and believe that the unique nature of a place and its diversity in itself is a beautiful sight to admire. To conclude, I most certainly believe that the advantages heavily outweigh the disadvantages as it brought the world and its peole closer than ever and has made cross-culture exchange take place on a larger scale than ever in human history.
Over the course of human history, various migrations and sea voyages have taken
place
in order to find lands anew and
different
from one's homeland and it continues even
today
.
But
, with the advent of
globalisation
, the experience of travelling to new
places
is no longer the same, both on a
positive
and
negative
side, about which we will discuss in the ensuing paragraphs.
Firstly
,
globalisation
has to
play the most considerable role in the increasing similarities of sceneries in
places
around the
world
. With it, came the numerous
companies
and brands, which
before
used
to
be limited
to a certain geographical area in terms of functioning, like
internationally
popular
fast
food joints
of
McDonald's, Kentucky Fried Chicken to name a few and fashion brands like Versace, Monet and
many
more. They are the most popular in the public domain and an international expanse of these
companies
to various countries, may it be developing or developed,
just
makes
them more
readily
and
easily
availaible
to
people
around the
world
.
Secondly
, the ever-growing technology of the internet and mobile phones has connected the
world
in a way never imagined
before
. Nowadays, one can surf the internet and can
see
and know all about the country they admire, may it be about the culture there or popular tourist destinations or even
local
specialties. Internet is almost
accesible
to everybody around the
world
and is reaching the corners, where it has not and is making cross-culture exchange stronger.
However
,
some
people
believe that these growing similarities are
slowly
killing the diversity of most
places
. Each destination once
used
to have its
own
unique set of traditions, customs, social exchanges
but
now
with such similarities to
be found
at all
places
around the
world-
it has
given
the
world
a
certain monotone and at extents, it may seem
also
seem like everything has been
generalised
and this sounds daunting to a certain set individuals and believe that the unique nature of a
place
and its diversity in itself is a
beautiful
sight to admire.
To conclude
, I most
certainly
believe that the advantages
heavily
outweigh the disadvantages as it brought the
world
and its
peole
closer than ever and has
made
cross-culture exchange take
place
on a larger scale than ever in human history.
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