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Two Critical Issue on Poverty

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What are the solutions of poverty in a society? 1. Maybe the murder of Austria-Hungary's prince was the reason that drove nations to World War However, have you ever thought which case was that led nations to the war? Well known politician Machiavelli stated that only the poverty unites and mobilize the people against to rulers. This quote refers to the actual reason (triggering motive) that forced to nations war due to lack of needing. From my point of view, there are two significant topics that must be considered as solutions against poverty: firstly, to explore or develop new energy sources that could decrease the energy outgoings; secondly, to improve farming lands and fresh food production to decline the nourishment costs. 2. What can be done to prevent teenage drug addiction? Do you know how many adolescents are having trouble because of drugs? The statistical report of the World Health Organization for 2022 depicts that 27% of high school students have tried drugs at least once. If it is anticipated that approximately a hundred million high school students live in Europe, then twenty-seven million young people have already tried drugs. The former president of Germany, Angela Merkel, stated during her farewell speech that fighting against narcotic crimes will be crucial for us. This perspective underlines how important to solve drug addiction problem between the youngsters. From my point of view, these two vital subjects that encounter drug addiction could be possible solutions: for a start, there must be a curriculum about drug addiction in the secondary school; then, the jail time for being a drug dealer must be doubled. 3. What are the solutions to prevent value loss in Turkish currency? After the COVID-19 pandemic, economic problems have become the main problem all around the world. Nevertheless, have you ever noticed that economic issues in Turkey are deeper than any developing country? This situation indicates that there must be other hidden problems under the economic crisis. World-wide known economist professor Özgür Demirtaş warned the government on the TV in the year of 2013 due to their wrong economic policies. But after speaking, (soon after his speech) clearly, it must have been ignored that his concerns have become a truth. Unfortunately since the last decade then today, Turkish lira have experienced dramatic plunge of its value. It is cheapen more than five times American Dollar, Euro and English Pound which is known as reserve currencies. Of course, this economic collapse can be reversed. From my perspective, these (following) two ideas will be vital for the next decade: first of all, economic policies have to be chosen by economists who know and conduct properly economy science fundamentals; secondly, to develop a policies which support and realize the high-tech produce assets. 4. How can we create more employment among young adults? Nowadays, most of the young adults asking same question each other. What will you do after school? Unfortunately, this question seems quite reasonable when we look over the young adult unemployment data. According to the Turkish Statistical Institute's research for 2021, 75% of the young adults who didn’t enroll in any university program are unemployed. Whereas, Mustafa Kemal Atatürk, who is the founder of democratic and secular Republic of Turkey have entrusted the republic to youngsters. From his perspective, this idea is thoroughly conceivable, but since that time, the education system has been corrupted adversely, so there is a lack of qualified young adults in the population. Nevertheless, there are two urgent regulations to come through for young unemployed problem, depending on my perspective: firstly, the education system creators should lean more on application than theory; then, the number of industrial high schools that prepare qualified technicians should significantly increase.
What are the
solutions
of poverty in a society? 1. Maybe the murder of Austria-Hungary's prince was the reason that drove nations to World War
However
, have you ever
thought
which case was that led nations to the war? Well known politician Machiavelli stated that
only
the poverty unites and mobilize the
people
against to rulers. This quote refers to the actual reason (triggering motive) that forced to nations war due to lack of needing. From my point of view, there are two significant topics that
must
be considered
as
solutions
against poverty:
firstly
, to explore or develop new energy sources that could decrease the energy outgoings;
secondly
, to
improve
farming lands and fresh food production to decline the nourishment costs. 2. What can
be done
to
prevent
teenage
drug
addiction? Do you know how
many
adolescents are having trouble
because
of
drugs
? The statistical report of the World Health Organization for 2022 depicts that 27% of high
school
students have tried
drugs
at least once. If it
is anticipated
that approximately a hundred million high
school
students
live
in Europe, then twenty-seven million
young
people
have already tried
drugs
. The former president of Germany, Angela Merkel, stated during her farewell speech that fighting against narcotic crimes will be crucial for us. This
perspective
underlines how
important
to solve
drug
addiction
problem
between the youngsters. From my point of view, these two vital subjects that encounter
drug
addiction could be possible
solutions
: for a
start
, there
must
be a curriculum about
drug
addiction in the secondary
school
; then, the jail time for being a
drug
dealer
must
be doubled
. 3. What are the
solutions
to
prevent
value loss in Turkish currency? After the COVID-19 pandemic,
economic
problems
have become the main
problem
all around the world.
Nevertheless
, have you ever noticed that
economic
issues in Turkey are deeper than any
developing country
? This situation indicates that there
must
be other hidden
problems
under the
economic
crisis. World-wide known economist professor
Özgür
Demirtaş
warned the
government
on the TV in the year of 2013 due to their
wrong
economic
policies.
But
after speaking, (
soon
after his speech)
clearly
, it
must
have been
ignored
that his concerns have become a truth. Unfortunately since the last decade then
today
, Turkish lira have experienced dramatic plunge of its value. It is
cheapen
more than five times American Dollar, Euro and English Pound which
is known
as reserve currencies.
Of course
, this
economic
collapse can
be reversed
. From my
perspective
, these (following) two
ideas
will be vital for the
next
decade:
first of all
,
economic
policies
have to
be chosen
by economists who know and conduct
properly
economy science fundamentals;
secondly
, to develop
a policies
which support and realize the high-tech produce assets. 4. How can we create more employment among
young
adults? Nowadays, most of the
young
adults
asking same question each other. What will you do after
school
? Unfortunately, this question seems quite reasonable when we look over the
young
adult unemployment data. According to the Turkish Statistical Institute's research for 2021, 75% of the
young
adults
who didn’t enroll in any university program
are unemployed
. Whereas, Mustafa
Kemal
Atatürk
, who is the founder of democratic and secular Republic of Turkey have entrusted the republic to youngsters. From his
perspective
, this
idea
is
thoroughly
conceivable,
but
since that time, the education system has
been corrupted
adversely
,
so
there is a lack of qualified
young
adults
in the population.
Nevertheless
, there are two urgent regulations to
come
through for
young
unemployed
problem
, depending on my
perspective
:
firstly
, the education system creators should lean more on application than theory; then, the number of industrial high
schools
that prepare qualified technicians should
significantly
increase.
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