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Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. PX79j
It has become a debatable issue that because of the cruelty of zoo's animal should not be kept in these confined places, where as others opine that animals need to be have under the surveillance them. however, I agree with the letter ideology. To begin with many valuable species are on the verge of extinction to save them and maintain the ecological chain, it has become mandatory to keep them into limited ares. To make it clear, these types of places are mainly put focus on Cross Breading method and try to increase the number of rare species. for example, Australian zoo named 'ancient zoo' had a steady incline in white Tiger count by keeping male and female Tiger together for 2 months in breeding season and astonishingly, female gave birth to 6 cubs and they kept continue this activity for next years from 2000. further, this zoo awarded as the best zoo of the word in year 2013 for this special initiative. Hence, endangered natural species could be protected by this effort and natural beauty too. Moreover, it fulfills the purpose of study or research for trainees. to explain it, who was studying 'Zoology' can acquire profound knowledge for their academic. this is really hard for them to wander in jungle to research on animals and probably become the prey of dangerous animals. Instead of putting their life in jeopardy, it had better to to attain information about animals by visiting zoos. As a consequence, completing the requirements of seekers, who want to have terrible knowledge and prefer not to go in jungle. However, only drawback of captivity of animals in Zoos is that these are natural habitats become the main cause of isolation for them. what is more, these Limited areas usually have restricted animals to live in single provided place but they want to live their life according to their rules, this prohibition finishes the enthusiasm among them to live and further some may quit food. due to this, their empty stomach leads to the major cause of fatality. therefore, this might be solved by keeping them into forest like places by planting trees to look natural habitat. Agglomerating all the view points it can be conspicuous that although at certain points use importance may look futile, it plays an integral part in the preservation of rare species, which holds more weightage than everything, according to me.
It has
become
a debatable issue that
because
of the cruelty of zoo's
animal
should not be
kept
in these confined
places
,
where as
others opine that
animals
need to be
have
under the surveillance them.
however
, I
agree
with the letter ideology. To
begin
with
many
valuable species are on the verge of extinction to save them and maintain the ecological chain, it has
become
mandatory to
keep
them into limited ares. To
make
it
clear
, these types of
places
are
mainly
put focus on Cross Breading method and try to increase the number of rare species.
for
example, Australian zoo named 'ancient zoo' had a steady incline in white Tiger count by keeping male and female Tiger together for 2 months in breeding season and
astonishingly
, female gave birth to 6
cubs and
they
kept
continue this activity for
next
years from 2000.
further
, this zoo awarded as the best zoo of the word in year 2013 for this special initiative.
Hence
, endangered
natural
species could
be protected
by this effort and
natural
beauty too.
Moreover
, it fulfills the purpose of study or research for trainees.
to
explain
it, who was studying 'Zoology' can acquire profound knowledge for their academic.
this
is
really
hard
for them to wander in jungle to research on
animals
and
probably
become
the prey of
dangerous
animals
.
Instead
of putting their
life
in jeopardy, it had better
to to
attain information about
animals
by visiting zoos. As a consequence, completing the requirements of seekers, who want to have terrible knowledge and prefer not to go in jungle.
However
,
only
drawback of captivity of
animals
in Zoos is that these are
natural
habitats
become
the main cause of isolation for them.
what
is more, these Limited areas
usually
have restricted
animals
to
live
in single provided
place
but
they want to
live
their life according to their
rules
, this prohibition finishes the enthusiasm among them to
live
and
further
some
may quit food.
due
to this, their empty stomach leads to the major cause of fatality.
therefore
, this might
be solved
by keeping them into forest like
places
by planting trees to look
natural
habitat. Agglomerating all the view points it can be conspicuous that although at certain points
use
importance may look futile, it plays an integral part in the preservation of rare species, which holds more weightage than everything, according to me.
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