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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live on a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay fpr this care. Who do you think should pay for this care the goveronment or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live on a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay fpr this care. Who do you think should pay for this care the goveronment or the family? m56p8
In tthe modernized families young people do not prefer live with olders and therefore they take someone for caring of them. In Britain, some people gets old people to live in other home with other old generation. And valanturs or nurses look after them. Usually country has to pay for this help. In my own opinion olders whose family do not care about them should pay for other people care, while the goverenment should provide good looking and conditions to old people. Family wwith old people it is good area to live. Because they able to solve easy our problems. Furthermore old people more polite, friendly and good people. To be mpre exact, olders every time help to us and they do not want to something to their care. There are some harsh people who can get old to liive in a homewith other old people. In fact each family who have old person should show their care to them. Because they deserving to care. Some people consider that the government should provide old people who live in a other home with nurses or with somebody who can show care to them. As said hollywood actor Tom Hardy "We should not compare level of people, for example, rich mens and people who have not anything". People consider if some families have got opportunities to provide with money they must pay to nurses to their caring. By other hand who have not the government should not ask paying. To colclusion, the government should not need to money. They should help to old people whose their families get them to live in other home with other old people.
In
tthe
modernized
families
young
people
do not prefer
live
with olders
and
therefore
they take someone for caring of them. In Britain,
some
people
gets
old
people
to
live
in
other
home with
other
old
generation. And
valanturs
or nurses look after them.
Usually
country
has to
pay for this
help
. In my
own
opinion
olders
whose
family
do not
care
about them should pay for
other
people
care
, while the
goverenment
should provide
good looking
and conditions to
old
people
. Family
wwith
old
people
it is
good
area to
live
.
Because
they
able to solve easy our problems.
Furthermore
old
people
more polite, friendly and
good
people
. To be
mpre
exact,
olders
every time
help
to
us and
they do not want to something to their
care
. There are
some
harsh
people
who
can
get
old
to
liive
in a
homewith
other
old
people
. In fact each
family
who
have
old
person should
show
their
care
to them.
Because
they deserving
to care.
Some
people
consider that the
government
should provide
old
people
who
live
in
a
other
home with nurses or with somebody
who
can
show
care
to them. As said
hollywood
actor Tom Hardy
"
We should not compare level of
people
,
for example
, rich
mens
and
people
who
have not anything
"
.
People
consider if
some
families
have
got
opportunities to provide with money they
must
pay to nurses to their caring. By
other
hand
who
have not the
government
should not ask paying. To
colclusion
, the
government
should not need to money. They should
help
to
old
people
whose their
families
get
them to
live
in
other
home with
other
old
people
.
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IELTS essay In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live on a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay fpr this care. Who do you think should pay for this care the goveronment or the family?

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