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Reader Critique #5 'The Giver '

Reader Critique #5 'The Giver ' apJKo
Reader Critique #5 In the book “The Giver “, written by Lois Lowry (1993), it has been shown how the story starts with the life which became released from pain, color, crimes, emotions, and love. Also, The way how the daily injection washed away their human being feelings. Everything starts with the main character called Jonas in a ceremony in which every graduated student must be assigned to a job by the Chief Elder that determines them to different works, where Jonas was appointed to be a receiver of the community’s memories who was responsible “The Giver” the old receiver who had been holding memories since the community started developing in such pattern. The book precisely hitches that there is a similar perspective compared with their community and our society which is the persecution of doing the same job that others do, it can be working the whole week eight hours per day. But in Jonas’s case, it is way more complicated for people who supposed to live without feelings, but it is the pattern of the world is the same as ours. Though, Jonas was indifferent and able to outgrow the matrix in his community including the infringement of rules that everyone must follow. This means that we don’t have to follow the path whereas everyone rather, instead it would be good if you have your own thoughts that you can actually lean on. After, it also plays a relevant role in people who without emotions able to focus on his/her work easily, it is an advantage for workers who are attempting to focus on one thing. The way how their community was so improved due to the injection made them see the world without any colors just black and white but also to inhibit emotions. However, it was exaggerated because the citizens of the community were likely to be “Robots” due to the rules and laws that there is no fun among youngsters, there is the only obligation of people in front of the government. But working hard without emotions can be good for the person who wants to achieve something.
Reader Critique #5 In the book “The Giver “, written by Lois Lowry (1993), it has
been shown
how the story
starts
with the life which became released from pain, color, crimes,
emotions
, and
love
.
Also
, The way how the daily injection washed away their human being feelings. Everything
starts
with the main character called Jonas in a ceremony in which every graduated student
must
be assigned
to a job by the Chief Elder that determines them to
different
works, where Jonas
was appointed
to be a receiver of the
community’s
memories
who
was responsible “The Giver” the
old
receiver
who
had been holding memories since the
community
started
developing in such pattern. The book
precisely
hitches that there is a similar perspective compared with their
community
and our society which is the persecution of doing the same job that others do, it can be working the whole week eight hours per day.
But
in Jonas’s case, it is way more complicated for
people
who
supposed to
live
without feelings,
but
it is the pattern of the world is the same as ours. Though, Jonas was indifferent and able to outgrow the matrix in his
community
including the infringement of
rules
that everyone
must
follow. This means that we don’t
have to
follow the path whereas everyone
rather
,
instead
it would be
good
if you have your
own
thoughts that you can actually lean on. After, it
also
plays a relevant role in
people
who
without
emotions
able to focus on his/her work
easily
, it is an advantage for workers
who
are attempting to focus on one thing. The way how their
community
was
so
improved
due to the injection made them
see
the world without any colors
just
black and white
but
also
to inhibit
emotions
.
However
, it
was exaggerated
because
the citizens of the
community
were likely to be “Robots” due to the
rules
and laws that there is no fun among youngsters, there is the
only
obligation of
people
in front of the
government
.
But
working
hard
without
emotions
can be
good
for the person
who
wants to achieve something.
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