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Q. Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Q. Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 6pdD0
It is often argued that the most fulfilling stage of a person’s life is during adolescence, while others believe that adulthood, despite things like a job, family and money concerns, is better. This essay agrees with the former, rather than the latter view. It will first discuss how grown-ups are much less fulfilled than teenagers because of the pressures they are under and then discuss how contented most teenagers are, before coming to the conclusion that the ages of thirteen to eighteen really are the best years of our lives. Upon reaching maturity people are expected to fend for themselves and this often leads to unhappiness. This is because most adults have rent and bills to pay, as well as a partner and dependents to look after, which more often than not, leads to them doing a job they don’t enjoy in exchange for money. A recent study by Queen’s University, Belfast found that 79% of people would leave their jobs if they didn’t have a mortgage and 64% of people stated that their job made them depressed at some point. On the other hand, young people are free from these worries because they are often supported financially and free from any real troubles. Most live with their parents who pay for all their needs and the only thing they have to focus on is studying. Research carried out by Cambridge University found that only 29% of 15-16 year old students said they were ‘happy’, but when questioned 10 years later 84% said that they were ‘much happier’ when they were 16. In conclusion, youth really is wasted on the young because older people are under much more strain when it comes to money and people relying on them.
It is
often
argued that the most fulfilling stage of a person’s life is during adolescence, while others believe that adulthood, despite things like a
job
, family and money concerns, is better. This essay
agrees
with the former,
rather
than the latter view. It will
first
discuss how grown-ups are much less fulfilled than
teenagers
because
of the pressures they are under and then discuss how contented most
teenagers
are,
before
coming to the conclusion that the ages of thirteen to eighteen
really
are the best years of our
lives
. Upon reaching maturity
people
are
expected
to fend for themselves and this
often
leads to unhappiness. This is
because
most adults have rent and bills to pay,
as well
as a partner and dependents to look after, which more
often
than not, leads to them doing a
job
they don’t enjoy in exchange for money. A recent study by Queen’s University, Belfast found that 79% of
people
would
leave
their
jobs
if they didn’t have a mortgage and 64% of
people
stated that their
job
made them depressed at
some
point.
On the other hand
, young
people
are free from these worries
because
they are
often
supported
financially
and free from any real troubles. Most
live
with their parents who pay for all their needs and the
only
thing they
have to
focus on is studying. Research carried out by Cambridge University found that
only
29% of 15-16 year
old
students said they were ‘happy’,
but
when questioned 10 years later 84% said that they were ‘much happier’ when they were 16.
In conclusion
, youth
really
is wasted
on the young
because
older
people
are under much more strain when it
comes
to money and
people
relying on them.
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IELTS academic Q. Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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