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pie charts illustrate the world spending, the world population and the ratio of consumption of resources.

pie charts illustrate the world spending, the world population and the ratio of consumption of resources. B06

The above given three pie charts illustrate the world spending, the world population and the ratio of consumption of resources. First of all, considering the data for World Spending, we see that a majority portion of the spending is attributed to "others" category, followed by food, transport, housing and clothing consecutively. We do not have further information on the "others" category. Secondly, from the world population pie chart, we can see that Asia accounts for more than half of the world population i. e. , 57%. This is followed by Europe and America at 14% each, we have Africa at 10% and remaining percentages is attributed to remaining countries. Thirdly, the pie chart showing Consumption of Resources tells us that USA and Europe consume 60% of the resources while other countries consume the remaining. However, the high figure for consumption of resources is inconsistent with the fact that Europe and USA comprise only 28% of the world population. Thus, it would be logical to conclude that there are several underlying factors that need to be considered while analysing the data showing consumption of resources in proportion with the population of a country.

The above given
 three pie charts illustrate the world
 spending, the world
population
 and the ratio of consumption
 of resources.

First of all
, considering the data for World
 Spending, we see
 that a majority portion of the spending is attributed
 to "
others"
 category, followed by food, transport, housing and clothing consecutively
. We do not have further
 information on the "
others"
 category.

Secondly
, from the world
population
 pie chart, we can see
 that Asia accounts for more than half of the world
population
i. e.
 ,
 57%. This is followed
 by Europe and America at 14% each, we have Africa at 10% and remaining percentages is attributed
 to remaining countries.

Thirdly
, the pie chart showing Consumption
 of Resources tells
 us that USA and Europe consume 60% of the resources while other countries consume the remaining. However
, the high figure for consumption
 of resources is inconsistent with the fact that Europe and USA comprise only
 28% of the world
population
. Thus
, it would be logical to conclude
 that there are several underlying factors that need to be considered
 while analysing
 the data showing consumption
 of resources in proportion with the population
 of a country. 

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