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Nowadays many young people are attracted towards dangerous sports. What are the reasons that make them so attractive?”

Nowadays many young people are attracted towards dangerous sports. What are the reasons that make them so attractive? ” M1k
DANGEROUS SPORTS Nowadays, many exciting and dangerous sports are becoming more popular day by day in the world. Mostly, attracting the young generation but they try these sports without complete knowledge and guidelines. There are many kinds of dangerous sports for various interests such as scuba-diving or bungee-jumping. On the other hand, sports that include violence are increasingly becoming a craze with the younger population like boxing or wrestling. I believe there are two causes of why young people are more attracted to do that; social media, the passion for adrenalin. The first reason of that the young generation tends to spend more time on social media and most of them can be easily influenced by others. They want to try and share posts to gain more likes and followers without even thinking about the consequences. It also adds a ‘coolness’ factor to their personality when they tell people about their stunts. If a young person truly enjoys doing these sports and knows which of the security measures should be taken, there is not a problem. However, the number of young people who want to do these sports because of making a great display to others is increasing in these years and they generally are not enough knowledge. This is a complication due to fact that there are numerous places where do not care about the safety of people and they risk people’s lives. Secondly, the young generation is adventurous and courageous to do anything that adds vitality to their lives. Extreme sports are an experience that humans can't do in daily life such as flying, fighting. In addition, adventurous sports need a lot of concentration. Consequently, they cannot think of any other issues while participating in them and get relieved of all the little worries in their head. Therefore, they actively participate in risky sports, so as to get that adrenaline rush of excitement and enjoyment. In conclusion, even though nowadays young people doing sports to emulate others or to feel adrenalin rush, sports should always be a part of people’s lives to stay healthy or to get away from stress but risking life for sports isn't bravery from every angle. They need to be conscious and think thoroughly about the effects of dangerous sports on their lives.
DANGEROUS
SPORTS Nowadays,
many
exciting and
dangerous
sports
are becoming more popular day by day in the world.
Mostly
, attracting the
young
generation 
but
they try these
sports
without complete knowledge and guidelines. There are
many
kinds of
dangerous
 sports for various interests such as scuba-diving or bungee-jumping. On the
other
hand,
sports
that include violence are
increasingly
becoming a craze with the younger population like boxing or wrestling. I believe there are two causes of why
young
people
are more attracted to do that; social media, the passion for adrenalin. The
first
reason of that the
young
generation tends to spend more time on social media and most of them can be
easily
influenced by others. They want to
try and
share posts to gain more likes and followers without even thinking about the consequences. It
also
adds
a ‘coolness’ factor to their personality when they
tell
people
about their stunts. If a
young
person
truly
enjoys doing these
sports
and knows which of the security measures should
be taken
, there is not a problem.
However
, the number of
young
people
who want to do these
sports
because
of making a great display to others is increasing in these
years and
they
generally
are not
enough
knowledge. This is a complication due to fact that there are numerous places where do not care about the safety of
people and
they
risk
people’s
lives
.
Secondly
, the
young
generation is adventurous and courageous to do anything that
adds
vitality to their
lives
. Extreme sports are an experience that humans can't do in daily life such as flying, fighting.
In addition
, adventurous
sports
need
a lot of
concentration.
Consequently
, they cannot
think
of any
other
issues while participating in them and
get
relieved of all the
little
worries in their head.
Therefore
, they
actively
participate in risky
sports
,
so as to
get
that adrenaline rush of excitement and enjoyment.
In conclusion
,
even though
nowadays
young
people
doing
sports
to emulate others or to feel adrenalin rush,
sports
should always be a part of
people’s
lives
to stay healthy or to
get
away from
stress
but
risking life for
sports
isn't bravery from every angle. They need to be conscious and
think
thoroughly
 about the effects of
dangerous
sports
on their
lives
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many young people are attracted towards dangerous sports. What are the reasons that make them so attractive? ”

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