Letter of amendment to editor who has published wrong information about your friend

I have always enjoyed reading the business section of your newspaper. I recently discovered that one of your correspondents had covered a story on one of my dear friend, Akshay, and his startup, Health Company. It was a well written article, however I found a couple of informations mentioned in it to be wrong. It is my duty to bring them to your notice and would expect you look into them seriously. The article appeared on the Sunday edition of your daily and was published on page 11. The article had a heading, 'The Fitness Mantra Company'. In the article, the writer covered various facets about Ackshay's life and how he got into the startup and led the company to new heights. I found that there were a couple of errors such as your correspondent mentioned Acksahy dropped out of engineering. The article also mentioned that the 'Health Company' is eyeing various Bollywood stars for integration and would soon be entering the fitness line actors. These statements are not only wrong but are also assumptions that have not been thoroughly looked into and no facts have been provided. Akshay has successfully completed his Bachelors in Technology and is not a dropout. Neither does his company have any plans for having a Bollywood star onboard. His company is presently focussing on mass market and it plans to remain in the same segment for a while. He has no plans to take his company to Bollywood or get associated with it. It is pivotal that you bring these mistakes done by your writer out as such information is harming the company. People associated with the company are fearing changes in company's visions and credibilty of Akshay. I would hence require you to publish a formal apology in your newspaper along with bringing in light the errors that were made. I would also like your team to republish the article with changes made else we will have to file for defammation. I would also ask you to take care in future for such mistakes regarding all companies specially Health Company. Hoping you would comply with my requests. Yours truly Shaurya