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HOW HAS THE EARTH CHANGED OVERTIME?

HOW HAS THE EARTH CHANGED OVERTIME? kGY1R
THOUSAND YEARS AGO, EARTH JUST HAVE TWO COLOURS: BLUE AND GREEN. OUR PLANET LOOKED LIKE A GORGOUS GEM AMONG THE VAST UNIVERSE. IN THAT PERIOD OF TIME, HUMAN LIVED IN HARMORNY WITH PLANTS AND ANIMALS. THE EARTH SUCH AS AN ENORMOUS HOUSE OF ALL LIFE. A THOUSAND YEARS LATTER, " OUR MAN’S HOME" IS NOT JUST HAVE TWO COLOURS, THERE EMERGE THE ORTHES INCLUDED RED, GREY AND BLACK. RED IS THE COLOUR OF FIRE. THE FIRE WHICH COVERED THE AMAZON FOREST. THE FLAME TAKES NUMBERS OF WILD ANIMALS’S LIFE, THE FLAME TAKE THEIR NATURE HOUSE AWAY. AND GREY SMOKE FROM THE FIRE INVADE BRAZIL WITH HOT, LIGHT OF FIRE, AND INTENSE SMELL OF SMOKE IN THE ATMOSPHERE. GREY IS ALSO THE COLOUR OF RUBBISH, WHICH IS APPEARING IN EVERY WHERE IN THIS WORLD. GREY IN THE FORESTS, GREY IN THE OCEAN. ACORDING TO THIENNHIEN. COM, THERE HAVE 3, 5 MILLION METRIC TONS OF WASTE PRODUCED EACH DAY. PLASTIC STRAW STUCKED IN TURTLE BREATHING, PLASTIC BAG CAPTURE A LITTLE FISH INSIDE, IT IS THE PRESSING PROBLEMS ARE HAPPENING IN REALITY. FURTHERMORE, THERE ARE A NUMBER OF LANDSTHAT HAVE GREY COLOUR. GREY, SOIL IS SAD CAUSE ITS BEST FRIEND HAVE BEEN REMOVED BY HUMANS. DAY BY DAY, SOIL ARE STILL THERE. HOW ABOUT TREES, WHERE ARE YOU? THE SOIL IS WAITING FOR YOU. AND BLACK? THE DIRTY LIQUID OVERFLOWS AND MIXES WITH FRESH WATER IN THE RIVERS, OCEAN. BLACK IS THE HUSBAND’S MOOD WHEN WITNESS HIS WIFE ALONG WITH BABY WASHED BY FLOOD. ALSO THE HURT, WOUND OF INNOCENT ANIMALS WHO LOSTED THEIR OWN NATURE HOUSES. AFTER A LONG TIME, humanity is finally killing the earth with their fearfulness. FOR THAT REASON, WE MUST DEAL WITH DISASTERS EVERY DAY, JUST LIKE THE RESPONSE OF NATURE TO ITS PAIN.
THOUSAND
YEARS AGO, EARTH
JUST
HAVE TWO
COLOURS
: BLUE AND GREEN. OUR PLANET LOOKED LIKE A
GORGOUS
GEM AMONG THE VAST UNIVERSE. IN THAT PERIOD OF TIME, HUMAN
LIVED
IN
HARMORNY
WITH PLANTS AND ANIMALS. THE EARTH SUCH AS AN ENORMOUS
HOUSE
OF ALL LIFE. A THOUSAND YEARS LATTER,
"
OUR
MAN
’S HOME
"
IS NOT
JUST
HAVE TWO
COLOURS
, THERE EMERGE THE
ORTHES
INCLUDED RED,
GREY
AND BLACK. RED IS THE
COLOUR
OF
FIRE
. THE
FIRE
WHICH COVERED THE AMAZON FOREST. THE FLAME TAKES NUMBERS OF WILD ANIMALS’S LIFE, THE FLAME TAKE THEIR NATURE
HOUSE
AWAY. AND
GREY
SMOKE FROM THE
FIRE
INVADE BRAZIL WITH HOT, LIGHT OF
FIRE
, AND INTENSE SMELL OF SMOKE IN THE ATMOSPHERE.
GREY
IS
ALSO
THE
COLOUR
OF RUBBISH, WHICH
IS APPEARING
IN
EVERY WHERE
IN THIS WORLD.
GREY
IN THE FORESTS,
GREY
IN THE OCEAN.
ACORDING
TO
THIENNHIEN
. COM, THERE HAVE 3, 5 MILLION METRIC TONS OF WASTE PRODUCED EACH DAY. PLASTIC
STRAW STUCKED
IN TURTLE BREATHING, PLASTIC BAG CAPTURE A
LITTLE
FISH INSIDE, IT IS THE PRESSING PROBLEMS ARE HAPPENING IN REALITY.
FURTHERMORE
, THERE ARE A NUMBER OF
LANDSTHAT
HAVE
GREY
COLOUR
.
GREY
, SOIL IS SAD CAUSE ITS BEST FRIEND HAVE
BEEN REMOVED
BY HUMANS. DAY BY DAY, SOIL ARE
STILL
THERE. HOW ABOUT TREES, WHERE ARE YOU? THE SOIL IS WAITING FOR YOU. AND BLACK? THE DIRTY LIQUID OVERFLOWS AND MIXES WITH FRESH WATER IN THE RIVERS, OCEAN. BLACK IS THE HUSBAND’S MOOD WHEN WITNESS HIS WIFE ALONG WITH BABY WASHED BY FLOOD.
ALSO
THE HURT, WOUND OF INNOCENT ANIMALS WHO
LOSTED
THEIR
OWN
NATURE
HOUSES
. AFTER A LONG TIME, humanity is
finally
killing the earth with their fearfulness. FOR THAT REASON, WE
MUST
DEAL WITH DISASTERS EVERY DAY,
JUST
LIKE THE RESPONSE OF NATURE TO ITS PAIN.
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