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some people believ that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime OTHER, however argue that the circumstance of an individual crime, and the mootivation for comitting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punisment. discuss both these views and give your own opinon.

some people believ that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime OTHER, however argue that the circumstance of an individual crime, and the mootivation for comitting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punisment. kGYKM
few people percies that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime while according to other, it shoulde be various punishment according their crime and also their might be few lenerse when go for punishment. these essay will discuess both views and my personel agrue is that it shoul be punishment to criminal accroding their crime. to commence with, there are several types of crimes some are gignetic and others are small. when someone catched by druing the rubberd then he should be punshiment by his crime rather than chearged by several crime. For istance, In the new york, police of new york catched the man during his rubbered and then they treated that man as killer. hence, such kind of law or punishment show the injustic. Moving towards final view, it is very significant to punishent to crimial according their crime but, "if it fixed the punishment for every crime, then might be crime will decline in future, For example, In afghanstan athourity of afghan has been punshing same to varoius crime, due this policy no one try to rubbe in addtion, after this ristrict rules rate of roube has been declined, as result, majorty of poeple will save from differnet rubber moreover, it will be peace full thing of every nations. consulsion, there are number of method are avilable to treate they criminal, but fixed punshment and diffenret punshiment both are valied in socity.
few
people
percies
that there should be
fixed
punishment
for each type of
crime
while according to other, it
shoulde
be various
punishment
according their
crime
and
also
their
might be few
lenerse
when go for
punishment
.
these
essay will
discuess
both views and my
personel
agrue
is that it
shoul
be
punishment
to criminal
accroding
their crime.
to
commence with, there are several types of
crimes
some
are
gignetic
and others
are
small
.
when
someone
catched
by
druing
the
rubberd
then he should be
punshiment
by his
crime
rather
than
chearged
by several
crime
. For
istance
, In the
new york
, police of
new york
catched
the
man
during his
rubbered and
then they treated that
man
as killer.
hence
, such kind of law or
punishment
show
the
injustic
. Moving towards final view, it is
very
significant to
punishent
to
crimial
according their
crime
but
,
"
if it
fixed
the
punishment
for every
crime
, then might be
crime
will decline
in future
,
For example
, In
afghanstan
athourity
of afghan has been
punshing
same to
varoius
crime
, due this policy no one try to
rubbe
in
addtion
, after this
ristrict
rules
rate of
roube
has
been declined
, as result,
majorty
of
poeple
will save from
differnet
rubber
moreover
, it will be peace full thing of every
nations
.
consulsion
, there are number of method are
avilable
to
treate
they criminal,
but
fixed
punshment
and
diffenret
punshiment
both are
valied
in
socity
.
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IELTS essay some people believ that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime OTHER, however argue that the circumstance of an individual crime, and the mootivation for comitting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punisment.

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