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History of Sickle Cell Disease

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The fatal disease of sickle cell is a disease that directly affects the hemoglobin. This disease was first documented in American in 1910 but has been known to been around since the late 1600s (History 2013). The discovery of this disease was also accompanied by the hypothesis that sickle cell anemia and malaria are linked and what the relationship between the two exactly is. As well as the complex relationship between sickle cell anemia and malaria. sickle cell anemia had many discoveries that followed the study of the disease itself. In this paper the importance of sickle cell anemia will be explained as well as the historical landmarks that made the discovery of this disease such an eye opener to medicine. In 1904 a young dental student by the name of Walter Clement Noel was admitted to the Chicago Presbyterian Hospital for severe anemia. Noel was of African decent from a wealthy family that lived in Grenada. Ernest Edward Irons was the doctor that exam Noel and put into his notes that Noels hemoglobin was, “Peculiar elongated and sickle-shaped. Noel was reinstated in the hospital a couple of times before returning to Grenada and opening a dentistry. Unfortunately, Noel died just twelve years in 1916 of pneumonia (History 2013). James B. Herrick, Irons supervising physician, wrote a paper in the Archives of Internal Medicine that was published in 1910 about the first known case of sickle cell disease. This was the first case in the United States that had been reported but strange blood smears of pear shaped hemoglobin was found in African literature in the 1870s. Because of the extremely high infant mortality rate researchers never really payed high attention to these strange blood smears until the discovery of Herrick and Irons (Winter). So what exactly is sickle cell anemia, it is a mutation in the hemoglobin gene that causes atypical hemoglobin molecules that have been named hemoglobin S. These hemoglobin S molecules can reshape the red blood cell to look like a C shape or a crescent shape. Because of the S or crescent you can imagine that in places that wind a lot like your intestines or brain the hemoglobin S molecules may catch onto each other and cause extreme pain from causing stagnation or blocking the flow of blood or Qi in TCM terms. Other signs of sickle cell is low blood cell count which in turn makes sickle cell turn into sickle cell anemia. Repeated infections is also a symptom of this disease and these signs and symptoms generally start in childhood (Genetics 2018). Sickle cell anemia is such a devastating disease because it can eventually lead to organ failure from oxygen deprivation to that organ. When the hemoglobin is in a crescent shape it cannot carry oxygen like how it is designed to do. Another problem is the crescent shape of the hemoglobin is not flexible and, as stated above, can get caught on each other causing blockage in small blood vessels which also disrupts the blood flow to organs. When Irons and Herrick discovered this in 1910 many mysterious and unexplained deaths started to make sense to more and more scientist and doctors and of course further research was accomplished. In 1927 two men named Hahn and Gillespie discovered that the sickle shape of the hemoglobin meant that there was a depletion of oxygen in the cell that was making it into this crescent shape. At first the two men were very excited because it was one more thing they knew about the disease but then were later disappointed when patients would come with the character trait of the sickle shaped hemoglobin but did not have the disease. This condition was named the, “sickle trait. ” This “sickle trait ” was further researched and in the late 1940s and early 1950s explanations started to arise. Reasons why some patients only had the “sickle trait ” verses the actual disease was explained as patients with the sickle trait were heterozygous, carry two different allele, where as patients with the actual disease were homozygous, carried two of the same sickle cell gene. This study was shown in 1949 when two papers interdependently came out one written by Col. E. A. Beet and the there by Dr. James V. Neel (Winters). The papers explain that the sickle cell disease is hereditary and that is how it is passed on generation after generation. As well as these two journals that were published in 1949, Linus Pauling and his colleague Dr. Harvey Itano started to test theories and demonstrate how sickle cell is actually a result of a genetic abnormality that takes place in the red blood cell itself. Two years later in 1951 they were able to prove this theory that hemoglobin had a different structure in patients with sickle cell disease rather than patients without sickle cell disease. Dr. Pauling termed this, “molecular disease” for certain disease that actually interrupt the chemical compound of their specific structure (History 2013). This led to thousands of diseases of molecular based genetic disease such as cystic fibrosis, hemochromatosis, and marfan syndrome just to name a few. In the early 1970s a doctor by the name of Charles F. Whitten realized that people with sickle cell disease had limited resources as far as medical and educational and made it a point to satisfy these peoples needs. Because of Dr. Whitten the Sickle Cell Disease Association of America (SCDAA) was created. He started this organization by simply taking an interest and having empathy towards patients that he saw and understanding that to overcome a disease you have to understand it and be smarter than the disease (History 2013). Because of the renowned research made by these scientist other facts about hemoglobin and molecular diseases were discovered. Because sickle cell anemia is a disease in where the red blood cell is disformed scientist discovered that there can be such molecular diseases that can lead to haemoblobinopathies (Luzzatto 2012). Hemoglobinopathy can better be defined as all genetic diseases of specifically hemoglobin. It was unknown before this discovery that diseases could take such a role on hemoglobin and actually inhibit its function. Different types of anemia were discovered because of this such as aplastic anemia, autoimmune hemolytic anemia and iron deficiency anemia. Once sickle cell started to get more and more research behind it scientist started to study the structural components of hemoglobin. It was then understood why the three-dimensional shape had different character traits when the hemoglobin was oxygenated or not. One of the main jobs of hemoglobin is to bind to oxygen and transport it to the desired tissue. Whether that be organ tissue, muscle tissue, etc. every tissue needs oxygen in order to survive. As stated above, tissues that receive lack of oxygen are in trouble of shut down which, as well know as medical professionals, once one organ starts to shut down they all start to shut down as well. This is one of the ways that makes sickle cell disease so dangerous because of the lack of oxygen flow to the body (Luzzatto 2012). One of the most major discoveries about sickle cell anemia was the genetic compound that accompanies the disease. The make up of the sickle cell disease as discussed earlier is a homogenous disease whereas carriers have a heterozygous trait. The discovery of this allowed researchers to start to wonder if other unexplained illnesses could be from genetic compounds as well. It was clear after continuous research and laboratory experiments that parents can have a direct affect on what their child will carry verses what their child with actually contract (Winters). There are some non-life threatening disorders such as poor vision but there are also fatal genetic disorders such as cystic fibrosis and breast cancer. As well as lack of oxygen to tissues, infections, and reduced number of red blood cells, research also shows that sickle cell disease can be especially detrimental if combined with infectious diseases, specifically malaria and salmonella. J B S Haldane had a theory that people who are composed of different genetic make ups would be at different risk of mortality when confronted with an infection disease or parasitic organism. He then theorized that this could especially be the case in malaria since it was see in many cases with people who had the sickle cell genetic make up. The first person to test this theory was A C Allison who showed through his research that the S gene was in high concentration of people who had contracted malaria, and even more surprising that patients that only had were carries of the gene seemed to have more of a protective gene against malaria. Further research depicted carriers of the S gene do get malaria but they tend to have lower numbers of parasitized red blood cells (Luzzatto 2012). Generally, malaria episodes can be taken care of but since malaria is an infectious disease of the blood the combination of sickle cell anemia and malaria can be extremely dangerous. Because of the reasons is because that the disease of malaria will make the anemia of sickle cell anemia worse (Protective 2018). This can make the anemia so bad that it is possible to be life threatening if not taken care of. Another way that malaria can directly affect the patient is making the patient extremely susceptible to pain to the point in which it is unbearable (Luzzatto 2012). Sickle cell is a genetic disease where the hemoglobin molecule is crescent shaped, brittle, and inflexible. The disease dates all the way back to the late 1600s but there was not any papers published about this disease till the year of 1910. The discovery and research of sickle cell disease led to the further discovery of genetic diseases. Specifically, scientist figured out through studying this genetic disease that there can be carriers of genetic diseases verses actually contracting the disease. Many infections such as salmonella and malaria have also been studied with this disease. Sickle Cell disease is an extremely dangerous disease that can have a detrimental affect on a persons life. The average person with sickle cell anemia lives till they are 42-47. Although life expectancy as well as vitality of life has increased, a great thanks to Dr. Whitten, there is so much more that needs to be understood about not only this genetic disease but all genetic diseases so as practitioners of medicine we can do our best to prevent and help patients overcome them.
The fatal
disease
of sickle
cell
is a
disease
that
directly
affects the hemoglobin. This
disease
was
first
documented in American in 1910
but
has
been known
to been around since the late 1600s
(History
2013). The
discovery
of this
disease
was
also
accompanied by the hypothesis that sickle
cell
anemia and malaria
are linked
and what the relationship between the two exactly is. As
well
as the complex relationship between sickle
cell
anemia and malaria.
sickle
cell
anemia had
many
discoveries
that followed the study of the
disease
itself. In this paper the importance of sickle
cell
anemia will be
explained
as
well
as the historical landmarks that made the
discovery
of this
disease
such an
eye opener
to medicine. In 1904 a young dental student by the name of Walter Clement Noel
was admitted
to the Chicago Presbyterian Hospital for severe anemia. Noel was of African
decent
from a wealthy family that
lived
in Grenada. Ernest Edward Irons was the doctor that exam Noel and put into his notes that Noels hemoglobin
was
, “Peculiar elongated and sickle-shaped. Noel
was reinstated
in the hospital a couple of times
before
returning to Grenada and opening a dentistry. Unfortunately, Noel
died
just
twelve years in 1916 of pneumonia
(History
2013). James B. Herrick, Irons supervising physician, wrote a paper in the Archives of Internal Medicine that
was published
in 1910 about the
first
known case of sickle
cell
disease. This was the
first
case in the United States that had
been reported
but
strange
blood
smears of pear shaped
hemoglobin
was found
in African literature in the 1870s.
Because
of the
extremely
high infant mortality rate researchers never
really
payed
high attention to these strange
blood
smears until the
discovery
of Herrick and Irons (Winter).
So
what exactly is sickle
cell
anemia, it is a mutation in the
hemoglobin
gene that causes atypical hemoglobin
molecules
that have
been named
hemoglobin
S. These
hemoglobin
S
molecules
can reshape the
red
blood
cell
to look like a C
shape
or a crescent shape.
Because
of the S or crescent you can imagine that in places that wind a lot like your intestines or brain the
hemoglobin
S
molecules
may catch onto each
other
and cause extreme pain from causing stagnation or blocking the flow of
blood
or
Qi
in TCM terms. Other signs of sickle
cell
is low
blood
cell
count which in turn
makes
sickle
cell
turn into sickle cell anemia. Repeated
infections
is
also
a symptom of this
disease
and these signs and symptoms
generally
start
in childhood (Genetics 2018). Sickle
cell
anemia is such a devastating
disease
because
it can
eventually
lead to organ failure from oxygen deprivation to that organ.
When
the
hemoglobin
is in a crescent
shape
it cannot carry oxygen like how it
is designed
to do. Another problem is the crescent
shape
of the
hemoglobin
is not flexible and, as stated above, can
get
caught on each
other
causing blockage in
small
blood
vessels which
also
disrupts the blood flow to organs. When Irons and Herrick discovered this in 1910
many
mysterious and unexplained deaths
started
to
make
sense to more and more
scientist
and doctors and
of course
further
research
was accomplished
. In 1927 two
men
named Hahn and Gillespie discovered that the sickle
shape
of the hemoglobin meant that there was a depletion of oxygen in the
cell
that was making it into this crescent shape. At
first
the two
men
were
very
excited
because
it was one more thing they knew about the disease
but
then were later disappointed when
patients
would
come
with the character
trait
of the sickle shaped
hemoglobin
but
did not have the disease. This condition
was named
the,
“sickle
trait. ”
This “sickle
trait ”
was
further
researched and in the late 1940s and early 1950s explanations
started
to arise. Reasons why
some
patients
only
had the “sickle
trait ”
verses the actual
disease
was
explained
as
patients
with the sickle
trait
were heterozygous, carry two
different
allele
,
where as
patients
with the actual
disease
were homozygous, carried two of the same sickle
cell
gene. This study
was shown
in 1949 when two papers
interdependently
came out one written by Col. E. A. Beet and the there by Dr. James V.
Neel
(Winters). The papers
explain
that the sickle
cell
disease
is hereditary and
that is
how it
is passed
on generation after generation. As
well
as these two journals that
were published
in 1949, Linus Pauling and his colleague Dr. Harvey
Itano
started
to
test
theories
and demonstrate how sickle
cell
is actually a result of a genetic abnormality that takes place in the
red
blood
cell
itself. Two years later in 1951 they were able to prove this
theory
that
hemoglobin
had a
different
structure in
patients
with sickle
cell
disease
rather
than
patients
without sickle
cell
disease. Dr. Pauling termed this, “molecular
disease”
for certain
disease
that actually interrupt the chemical compound of their specific structure
(History
2013). This led to thousands of
diseases
of molecular based
genetic
disease
such as cystic fibrosis,
hemochromatosis
, and
marfan
syndrome
just
to name a few. In the early 1970s a doctor by the name of Charles F.
Whitten
realized that
people
with sickle cell disease had limited resources as far as medical and educational and made it a point to satisfy these
peoples
needs.
Because
of Dr.
Whitten
the Sickle
Cell
Disease
Association of America (
SCDAA
)
was created
. He
started
this organization by
simply
taking an interest and having empathy towards patients that he
saw
and understanding that to overcome a
disease
you
have to
understand it and be smarter than the
disease
(History
2013).
Because
of the renowned
research
made by these
scientist
other
facts about
hemoglobin
and molecular
diseases
were discovered
.
Because
sickle
cell
anemia is a
disease
in where the
red
blood
cell
is
disformed
scientist discovered that there can be such molecular
diseases
that can lead to
haemoblobinopathies
(
Luzzatto
2012).
Hemoglobinopathy
can better
be defined
as all
genetic
diseases
of
specifically
hemoglobin. It was unknown
before
this
discovery
that
diseases
could take such a role on
hemoglobin
and actually inhibit its function.
Different
types of anemia
were discovered
because of this
such as
aplastic
anemia, autoimmune
hemolytic
anemia and
iron
deficiency anemia. Once sickle
cell
started
to
get
more and more
research
behind it
scientist
started
to study the structural components of hemoglobin. It was then understood why the three-dimensional
shape
had
different
character
traits
when the hemoglobin
was oxygenated
or not. One of the main jobs of
hemoglobin
is to bind to oxygen and transport it to the desired tissue. Whether that be organ
tissue
, muscle
tissue
, etc.
every
tissue
needs oxygen in order to survive. As stated above,
tissues
that receive lack of oxygen are in trouble of shut down which,
as well
know as medical professionals, once one organ
starts
to shut down they all
start
to shut down as well. This is one of the ways that
makes
sickle
cell
disease
so
dangerous
because
of the lack of oxygen flow to the body (
Luzzatto
2012). One of the most major
discoveries
about sickle
cell
anemia was the
genetic
compound that accompanies the disease. The
make
up of the sickle
cell
disease
as discussed earlier is a homogenous
disease
whereas carriers have a heterozygous trait. The
discovery
of this
allowed
researchers to
start
to wonder if
other
unexplained illnesses could be from
genetic
compounds
as well
. It was
clear
after continuous
research
and laboratory experiments that parents can have a direct
affect
on what their child will carry verses what their child with actually contract (Winters). There are
some
non-life threatening disorders such as poor vision
but
there are
also
fatal genetic disorders such as cystic fibrosis and breast cancer. As
well
as lack of oxygen to
tissues
,
infections
, and
reduced
number of
red
blood
cells
, research
also
shows
that sickle
cell
disease
can be
especially
detrimental if combined with infectious diseases,
specifically
malaria and salmonella. J B S Haldane had a
theory
that
people
who
are composed
of
different
genetic
make ups
would be at
different
risk
of mortality when confronted with an
infection
disease
or parasitic organism. He then theorized that this could
especially
be the case in malaria since it was
see
in
many
cases with
people
who
had the sickle
cell
genetic
make
up. The
first
person to
test
this
theory
was A C Allison
who
showed
through his
research
that the S gene was in high concentration of
people
who
had contracted malaria, and even more surprising that
patients
that
only
had
were
carries of the gene seemed to have more of a protective gene against malaria.
Further
research
depicted carriers of the S gene do
get
malaria
but
they tend to have lower numbers of parasitized
red
blood
cells
(
Luzzatto
2012).
Generally
, malaria episodes can
be taken
care of
but
since malaria is an infectious
disease
of the blood the combination of sickle
cell
anemia and malaria can be
extremely
dangerous
.
Because
of the reasons is
because
that the
disease
of malaria will
make
the anemia of sickle cell
anemia
worse (Protective 2018). This can
make
the anemia
so
bad
that it is possible to be life threatening if not taken care of. Another way that malaria can
directly
affect the
patient
is making the
patient
extremely
susceptible to pain to the point in which it is unbearable (
Luzzatto
2012). Sickle
cell
is a
genetic
disease
where the
hemoglobin
molecule
is crescent shaped, brittle, and inflexible. The
disease
dates all the way back to the late 1600s
but
there was not any papers published about this
disease
till the year of 1910. The
discovery
and
research
of sickle
cell
disease
led to the
further
discovery
of
genetic
diseases.
Specifically
,
scientist
figured out through studying this
genetic
disease
that there can be carriers of
genetic
diseases
verses actually contracting the disease.
Many
infections
such as salmonella and malaria have
also
been studied
with this disease. Sickle
Cell
disease
is an
extremely
dangerous
disease
that can have a detrimental
affect
on a
persons
life. The average person with sickle
cell
anemia
lives
till they are 42-47. Although life expectancy as
well
as vitality of life has increased, a great thanks to Dr.
Whitten
, there is
so
much more that needs to
be understood
about not
only
this
genetic
disease
but
all genetic
diseases
so
as practitioners of medicine we can do our best to
prevent
and
help
patients overcome them.
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