This passage is an extract of an autobiography taken from a personal account called, ‘Leila Volunteered as a teacher in Fiji’ and obviously the author is Leila, herself. The purpose of writing is mainly influencing or inspiring the reader along with being informative. The audience targeted is everyone but mainly, teenagers or young adults who might want to get a job and/or experience in foreign countries. A simple yet impactful language has been used. The tone remains positive and influential throughout the passage. ‘Volunteering’ and ‘positivity towards oneself’ greatly highlight the theme.
Firstly, dialect can be spotted right at the beginning of the passage. For example, “bula”
This local dialect depicts that the author has ample knowledge about Fiji which is why words/phrases used in Fiji can be observed by the reader. Therefore, the passage becomes reliable and informative for the reader.
Moreover, the author has added sarcasm along with slight humor e. g. “on my road in England, I would be lucky if I got one ‘hello’ a week! ” Through this technique, the author has conveyed her feelings and compared her experience in both Fiji and England. It also provokes laughter while reading through the passage.
Additionally, an antithesis written by the author has been a helpful tool for the author to express her feelings and experience. For example, “I’ve learnt about what makes me happy and what makes me sad, I’ve learnt about how I should treat myself and how I should treat others. ” This particular device signifies two feelings which are opposite to each other and therefore Leila successfully engages with the reader and grabs his/her attention.
Furthermore, the positive tone has greatly reflected the author’s mood and attitude towards volunteering and the time she spent in Fiji. For example, ‘Fiji time, slow-paced’ “Therefore, I can say with confidence that patience is a skill that I have really developed. ” “I feel more independent and have more faith in myself. ” These examples show that the author has taken everything positively and become an example for people interested in volunteering for foreign countries. The reader feels encouraged and inspired to do the same.
Fifthly, triples has been a great addition to the passage which can be seen by, “Confidence, a positive attitude and open-mindedness are the best tools. ” This adds emphasis and proceeds with an impact on the reader. A greater effect can be achieved if the words are made stronger as the list builds up.
Adding to this, imagery is a great rhetorical technique used by the author. For example, “appointments are often not met and people stroll around very slowly in the streets. It’s quite usual to find yourself waiting around for someone or something to happen in Fiji. ” This creates an image in the reader’s mind of what Fiji looks like and describes the environment too. It also provokes the reader to imagine themselves in the position of the author(Leila) as a volunteer in Fiji to understand her experience better.
Lastly, the theme or main idea of this passage is ‘volunteering’ which can be seen through, “Making a positive contribution is the best thing about volunteering. ” “As a volunteer of seven months…. ” This connotes that the author is describing her experience as a volunteer which can be of great help for the reader and it also depicts that a relationship between the author and reader is built as if they are working in a volunteering organisation together.
In conclusion, Leila has achieved her purpose of writing this passage by using rhetorical techniques, however literary devices haven’t been used as much. She has shared her experience and encourages the reader to learn from it too.
This
passage
is an extract of an autobiography taken from a personal account called, ‘Leila Volunteered as a teacher in Fiji’ and
obviously
the
author
is Leila, herself. The purpose of writing is
mainly
influencing or inspiring the reader along with being informative. The audience targeted is everyone
but
mainly
,
teenagers
or young adults who might want to
get
a job and/or
experience
in foreign countries. A simple
yet
impactful language has been
used
. The tone remains
positive
and influential throughout the
passage
.
‘Volunteering’
and ‘positivity towards oneself’
greatly
highlight the theme.
Firstly
, dialect can
be spotted
right at the beginning of the
passage
. For
example
, “
bula
”
This local dialect depicts that the
author
has ample knowledge about Fiji which is why words/phrases
used
in Fiji can
be observed
by the reader.
Therefore
, the
passage
becomes reliable and informative for the reader.
Moreover
, the
author
has
added
sarcasm along with slight humor
e. g.
“
on
my road in England, I would be lucky if I
got
one ‘hello’ a week! ” Through this technique, the
author
has conveyed her feelings and compared her
experience
in both Fiji and England. It
also
provokes laughter while reading through the passage.
Additionally
, an antithesis written by the
author
has been a helpful tool for the
author
to express her feelings and
experience
. For
example
, “I’ve
learnt
about what
makes
me happy and what
makes
me sad, I’ve
learnt
about how I should treat myself and how I should treat others. ” This particular device signifies two feelings which are opposite to each other and
therefore
Leila
successfully
engages with the reader and grabs his/her attention.
Furthermore
, the
positive
tone has
greatly
reflected the
author’s
mood and attitude towards
volunteering
and the time she spent in Fiji. For
example
, ‘Fiji time, slow-paced’ “
Therefore
, I can say with confidence that patience is a
skill
that I have
really
developed. ” “I feel more independent and have more faith in myself. ” These
examples
show
that the
author
has taken everything
positively
and become an
example
for
people
interested in
volunteering
for foreign countries. The reader feels encouraged and inspired to do the same.
Fifthly
, triples has been a great addition to the
passage
which can be
seen
by, “Confidence, a
positive
attitude and open-mindedness are the best tools. ” This
adds
emphasis and proceeds with an impact on the reader. A greater effect can
be achieved
if the words
are made
stronger as the list builds up.
Adding to this, imagery is a great rhetorical technique
used
by the
author
. For
example
, “appointments are
often
not met and
people
stroll around
very
slowly
in the streets. It’s quite usual to find yourself waiting around for someone or something to happen in Fiji. ” This creates an image in the reader’s mind of what Fiji looks like and
describes
the environment too. It
also
provokes the reader to imagine themselves in the position of the author(Leila) as a volunteer in Fiji to understand her
experience
better.
Lastly
, the theme or main
idea
of this
passage
is
‘volunteering’
which can be
seen
through, “Making a
positive
contribution is the best thing about
volunteering
. ” “As a volunteer of seven months…. ” This connotes that the
author
is describing her
experience
as a volunteer which can be of great
help
for the reader and it
also
depicts that a relationship between the
author
and reader
is built
as if they are working in a
volunteering
organisation
together.
In conclusion
, Leila has achieved her purpose of writing this
passage
by using rhetorical techniques,
however
literary devices haven’t been
used
as much. She has shared her
experience
and encourages the reader to learn from it too.