Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?
Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved? 7p952
The issue of leaving the school at early age without completing one's education, is commonly observed as the cause of rising rate of unemployment. This concern has led this essay towards two major points: the causes, which includes heavy school fees and unhealthy school environment; and few measures to curb, which involves reduction in tuitions fee of schools and constituting committee by the schools.
The hefty schools fees on the students can be the concerning factor. The burden of heavy levy of various charges by the Schools, which is being unnecessarily charged is not only makes students to leave their schooling at early age, but also leads them to do part time work in their adolescents ages due to the financial insufficiency to pay the fees. In additions to it, owing to the sick surroundings within some schools makes many students specially the girls to drop their studies in between; as many younger students treated inappropriately within the school premises, so it results in creating threat in their minds to continue studies. Had Radha, my cousin, not experienced the misbehave from her Science teacher, She would not had been left her studies in between.
Despites the aforementioned reasons, the issues of rise in unemployment due to stepping back without completing the education by the students can be sorted by taking timely measures. Firstly, the Educational Officials ought to pass strict orders to curb the unessential charges of the schools, such that stringiest actions must be taken against those who are found to be guilty. Secondly, if the Schools arrange regular seminars by the relevant committees awaring about students rights and post implications of leaving the schools in between, then many children's may become familiar with the school staff to discuss the issue might causing issue to them. A survey by Times Magazine, 2021 editions, stated that Mexico has reported the least school drop outs by reducing tuition fees and conducting various programs within the schools.
To recapitulate, although the heavy fees and inappropriate behavior with the school’s students has led them towards unemployment, the timely actions in reducing such fees and arranging meeting can control this alarming issue within the sport span of time
The 
issue
 of leaving the 
school
 at early age without completing one's education, is 
commonly
 observed as the cause of rising rate of unemployment. This concern has led this essay towards two major points: the causes, which includes heavy 
school
 fees
 and unhealthy 
school
 environment; and few measures to curb, which involves reduction in 
tuitions
 fee
 of 
schools
 and constituting committee by the schools.
The hefty 
schools
 fees
 on the 
students
 can be the concerning factor. The burden of heavy levy of various charges by the 
Schools
, which is being 
unnecessarily
 charged is not 
only
 makes
 students
 to 
leave
 their schooling at early age, 
but
 also
 leads them to do 
part time
 work in their adolescents ages due to the financial insufficiency to pay the 
fees
. In additions to it, owing to the sick surroundings within 
some
 schools
 makes
 many
 students
 specially
 the girls to drop their studies in between; as 
many
 younger 
students
 treated 
inappropriately
 within the 
school
 premises, 
so
 it results in creating threat in their minds to continue studies. Had 
Radha
, my cousin, not experienced 
the misbehave
 from her Science teacher, She would not 
had
 been 
left
 her studies in between.
Despites
 the aforementioned reasons, the 
issues
 of rise in unemployment due to stepping back without completing the education by the 
students
 can 
be sorted
 by taking timely measures. 
Firstly
, the Educational Officials ought to pass strict orders to curb the unessential charges of the 
schools
, such that stringiest actions 
must
 be taken
 against those who 
are found
 to be guilty. 
Secondly
, if the 
Schools
 arrange regular seminars by the relevant committees 
awaring
 about 
students
 rights and post implications of leaving the 
schools
 in between, then 
many
 children's may become familiar with the 
school
 staff to discuss the 
issue
 might causing 
issue
 to them. A survey by Times Magazine, 2021 editions, stated that Mexico has reported the least 
school
 drop outs
 by reducing tuition 
fees
 and conducting various programs within the schools.
To recapitulate, although the heavy 
fees
 and inappropriate behavior with the 
school’s
 students
 has led them towards unemployment, the timely actions in reducing such 
fees
 and arranging meeting can control this alarming 
issue
 within the sport span of time
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