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Being Future Leader of world

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I am Ceren Yuksel. I have become a person who likes to take risks for this purpose, who has been trying to make a difference all her life. I can say that my first risk was my choice of profession, despite all the reactions I received from around me, I became a biomedical engineer. I know that it is the profession of the future and it was one of my dreams to integrate them into my business by developing technologies that help people in the field of health. And I have worked hard to achieve this goal of mine. I realized my projects by contacting doctors in America when there was no one I could learn destructive technologies from in my country and get help from. I have worked in many fields to find my interest. I want to be a good project manager. As an engineer in this field, I had to understand all technologies, so I learned about emerging technologies and current technologies in the field of health, I learned what was being done from their experts. And we talked about the point of what can be done with constant mutual consultations. I am very prone to teamwork in the studies I have been in and I have become the manager of the projects I have been in. I have constantly improved myself to understand the project well, to be a good team leader. Then I am studying for my master's degree at the best university in the country to become an expert in my profession, where I am also working on Alzheimer's disease, which is our family disease. I believe that Alzheimer's disease, like any disease, has a cure, I chose my master's thesis in this field to contribute to the research of this topic. I have been selected among the future women leaders fellows organized by Sanofi & Kagider in my country dec At the same time, I am continuing my career in a pharmaceutical company to contribute to healing people. I will constantly work to be useful to humanity. I am developing myself a lot in these areas and I am shining with my knowledge where I am. And I have full faith that one day I will become the future female leader in my field.
I am
Ceren
Yuksel
. I have
become
a person who likes to take
risks
for this purpose, who has been trying to
make
a difference all her life.
I
can say that my
first
risk
was my choice of profession, despite all the reactions I received from around me, I became a biomedical engineer.
I
know that it is the profession of the future and it was one of my dreams to integrate them into my business by developing
technologies
that
help
people
in the
field
of health. And I have worked
hard
to achieve this goal of mine. I realized my
projects
by contacting doctors in America when there was no one I could learn destructive
technologies
from in my country and
get
help
from. I have worked in
many
fields
to find my interest.
I
want to be a
good
project
manager. As an engineer in this
field
, I had to understand all
technologies
,
so
I learned about emerging
technologies
and
current
technologies
in the
field
of health, I learned what was
being done
from their experts. And we talked about the point of what can
be done
with constant mutual consultations. I am
very
prone to teamwork in the studies I have been in and I have
become
the manager of the
projects
I have been in. I have
constantly
improved
myself to understand the
project
well, to be a
good
team leader. Then I am studying for my master's degree at the best university in the country to
become
an expert in my profession, where I am
also
working on Alzheimer's
disease
, which is our family
disease
. I believe that Alzheimer's
disease
, like any
disease
, has a cure, I chose my master's thesis in this
field
to contribute to the research of this topic. I have
been selected
among the future women leaders fellows organized by
Sanofi
&
Kagider
in my country
dec
At the same time, I am continuing my career in a pharmaceutical
company
to contribute to healing
people
.
I
will
constantly
work to be useful to humanity.
I
am developing myself a lot in these
areas and
I am shining with my knowledge where I am. And I have full faith that one day I will
become
the future female leader in my
field
.
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