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Worth to visit Chaungthar beach

Worth to visit Chaungthar beach WDX7W
IntroductionThe purpose of this report is to review options for a three day tour for tourist. Last year we had a tour to Bagan. We have received both good and bad reviews. This report is based on feedback on that tour. Ranges of sites and time to visit sitesThey don't like to go many places within one day. However, there's many pagodas in Bagan so we had to go four or five pagodas in one day. There were not much time to rest so they had to rush from one place to another. Despite that, they enjoy visiting pagodas in Bagan. Transport and refreshmentsThey mentioned our transportation is quite superb. Nevertheless, they couldn't stand hotness in Bagan. They requested to fix the air conditioners in a good quality. Even though, I hired high-end caterers for tourist, the food was bland and smell is not good. Unlike same dishes, they want to eat different dishes everyday. Availability of guidesEven though, we hired outstanding guides. As you know, when the tourists reached pagoda, groups of children were struggling to explain the history of pagoda first. In spite of that, they got annoyed and they want to stay alone. RecommendationI suggest to visit Shan State for this year. It has plenty of mind blowing pagodas, awe-inspiring lake and also heart warming festivals. In contrast of weather in Bagan, Shan state is quite cold and pleasant. We must hire high-end caterers to serve with superb traditional food. By comparison, Shan state has less place to travel. However, tourist can't get annoyed and tired of travel. I would come up with new activities and plans to entertain our customers. I swear this tour will worth to visit.
IntroductionThe
purpose of this report is to review options for a
three day
tour for
tourist
. Last year we had a tour to
Bagan
. We have received both
good
and
bad
reviews. This report
is based
on feedback on that tour. Ranges of sites and time to visit
sitesThey
don't like to go
many
places within one day.
However
, there's
many
pagodas
in Bagan
so
we had to go four or five
pagodas
in one day. There were not much time to rest
so
they had to rush from one place to another. Despite that, they enjoy visiting
pagodas
in
Bagan
. Transport and
refreshmentsThey
mentioned our transportation is quite superb.
Nevertheless
, they couldn't stand hotness in
Bagan
. They requested to
fix
the air conditioners in a
good
quality.
Even though
, I hired high-
end
caterers for
tourist
, the food was bland and smell is not
good
. Unlike same dishes, they want to eat
different
dishes
everyday
. Availability of
guidesEven
though, we hired outstanding guides. As you know, when the
tourists
reached
pagoda
, groups of children were struggling to
explain
the history of
pagoda
first
.
In spite of
that, they
got
annoyed and
they want to stay alone.
RecommendationI
suggest to visit
Shan State for this year. It has
plenty
of
mind blowing
pagodas
, awe-inspiring lake and
also
heart warming
festivals. In
contrast
of weather in
Bagan
, Shan state is quite
cold
and pleasant. We
must
hire high-
end
caterers to serve with superb traditional food. By comparison, Shan state has less place to travel.
However
,
tourist
can't
get
annoyed and tired of travel. I would
come
up with new activities and plans to entertain our customers. I swear this tour will worth to visit.
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