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A quality education is difficult to take.

A quality education is difficult to take. 2eX
I think that a quality education is that students can study what they really want to learn without worries, and I think that I'm getting a quality education, because now I can get the lecture what I have been interested in without worry. This is because my parents work hard every day and give me a chance to learn. In Japan, we need a lot of money to study in high school and university, so if you don't have money and your parents don't give you an opportunity to learn, you cannot get a quality education. Also, in developing countries around the world, there are many children who work without receiving education. This is big problem. A quality education need a pen, note, classroom, good teacher and so on. This mean that a quality education costs money. Then most children don't have money, so I think that it is parent' responsibility to provide children with a quality education. Parents have to work and make money to give their children good education. However, there are few parents who cannot afford to pay for their children's education. This situation is so severe. For example, parents want their children to get good-quality education, but they cannot due to financial problems. At that time, the government must provide some assistances. For instance, the government builds the school, provides families who cannot pay money for children's education with money, and improves teachers' ability to teach. This is the true government work. Now, I have stated that it is parents' responsibility to provide children with high-quality education and it is government' responsibility if the parents don't have money for their children's education. However, there are many ways that we can improve the quality of education we receive. From now, I will talk about what I have been working for my education. First, I set the time to study before I start studying, and when the time I set is over, take a break for a few minutes. This makes it possible to concentrate on study, so I have kept this way. Second, I ask my teacher what I couldn't understand soon after the class. Most Japanese students are shy and they cannot ask people what they couldn't understand but asking teacher some questions and getting explanations makes your study improve, so I think that having questions and asking them is very important for my education. Third, when I have something I interested in, I always search it by reading books or finding out the page on the internet. Fourth, I try to review the every lecture on the day I received. Before I go to bed, I see the notes I took and check that there are no questions and what I couldn't understand. This way is very effective for my understanding and memory. Most students think that education is what we receive. This is correct, but I think that we mustn't be passive to receive education. I mean that we need financial support from our parents and government assistance to receive high-quality education, and because of these support, we can study what we really want to learn without worries. However, you must work hard on your study to improve your own education.
I
think
that a
quality
education
is that students can
study
what they
really
want to learn without worries, and I
think
that I'm getting a
quality
education
,
because
now
I can
get
the lecture what I have
been interested
in without worry. This is
because
my
parents
work
hard
every day and give me a chance to learn. In Japan, we need
a lot of
money
to
study
in high school and university,
so
if you
don't
have
money
and your
parents
don't
give you an opportunity to learn, you cannot
get
a
quality
education
.
Also
, in
developing countries
around the world, there are
many
children
who
work
without receiving education. This is
big
problem. A
quality
education
need a pen, note, classroom,
good
teacher and
so
on. This mean that a
quality
education
costs
money
. Then most
children
don't
have
money
,
so
I
think
that it is parent' responsibility to
provide
children
with a
quality
education
.
Parents
have to
work
and
make
money
to give their
children
good
education
.
However
, there are few
parents
who cannot afford to pay for their children's
education
. This situation is
so
severe.
For example
,
parents
want their
children
to
get
good
-quality
education
,
but
they cannot due to financial problems. At that time, the
government
must
provide
some
assistances
.
For instance
, the
government
builds the school,
provides
families who cannot pay
money
for children's
education
with
money
, and
improves
teachers' ability to teach. This is the true
government
work.
Now
, I have stated that it is parents' responsibility to
provide
children
with high-quality
education
and it is
government
' responsibility if the
parents
don't
have
money
for their children's
education
.
However
, there are
many
ways that we can
improve
the
quality
of
education
we
receive
. From
now
, I will talk about what I have been working for my education.
First
, I set the time to
study
before
I
start
studying, and when the time I set is over, take a break for a few minutes. This
makes
it possible to concentrate on
study
,
so
I have
kept
this way. Second, I ask my teacher what I couldn't understand
soon
after the
class
. Most Japanese students are
shy and
they cannot ask
people
what they couldn't understand
but
asking teacher
some
questions and getting explanations
makes
your
study
improve
,
so
I
think
that having questions and asking them is
very
important
for my education. Third, when I have something I interested in, I always search it by reading books or finding out the page on the internet. Fourth, I try to review the every lecture on the day I received.
Before
I go to bed, I
see
the notes I took and
check
that there are no questions and what I couldn't understand. This way is
very
effective for my understanding and memory. Most students
think
that
education
is what we
receive
. This is correct,
but
I
think
that we mustn't be passive to
receive
education
. I mean that we need financial support from our
parents
and
government
assistance to
receive
high-quality
education
, and
because
of these support, we can
study
what we
really
want to learn without worries.
However
, you
must
work
hard
on your
study
to
improve
your
own
education
.
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