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[21:39, 17.02.2022] Emre Koçyiğit: Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the corret way of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that it is not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life in the future. Whats your opinion?

[21: 39, 17. 02. 2022] Emre Koçyiğit: Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the corret way of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that it is not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life in the future. Whats your opinion? wX9ed
Since human being exist, they are always count on old people. Because human kind think, old people knowledge and experience wider than younger. This situation have been seen ancient times. If people goes hunt or something, they are always listen experince elderly people. Moreover they often choose older people as their leader. But as time goes by this case are changing. Time is passing and tecnologyl devolepment are further every day and there are many humans who are wrote their experience and people read about it. As for now days, we have a ınternet and it source is enormously. Humans who are wonder about any subject they are search on internet and often reach true knowledge. Young people use constantly this way but on the other hand old people do not use often. They are stick their exprince, it dosen't matter their knowledge is enough or not, and unfortunatelly most of them going this way. Therefore their advice for young people do not good always. For these reason children's development is sometimes badly affected because of wrong advice. Occasionally their life is ruined, due to misdirections. But there is not thing always ignorant old people, some old people knowledge is enough and their direction is sensible, they see the right choices for young people To sum up Young people need listen elderly people, because they has not a efficient knowledge. But must be a careful where it take advice. They do not trust blindly, always resource true information. If apply these think, new generation prepare for modern life truely
Since
human
being exist, they are always
count
on
old
people
.
Because
human
kind
think
,
old
people
knowledge
and experience wider than younger.
This situation have
been
seen
ancient times. If
people
goes
hunt or something, they are always
listen
experince
elderly
people
.
Moreover
they
often
choose older
people
as their leader.
But
as time goes by this case are changing. Time is passing and
tecnologyl
devolepment
are
further
every day and there are
many
humans
who are
wrote
their experience and
people
read about it. As for
now
days, we have a
ınternet
and it
source
is
enormously
.
Humans
who are wonder about any subject they are search on internet and
often
reach true
knowledge
.
Young
people
use
constantly
this way
but
on the other hand
old
people
do not
use
often
. They are stick their
exprince
, it
dosen
't matter their
knowledge
is
enough
or not, and
unfortunatelly
most of them going this way.
Therefore
their advice for
young
people
do not
good
always
. For these reason children's development is
sometimes
badly
affected
because
of
wrong
advice.
Occasionally
their life
is ruined
, due to
misdirections
.
But
there is not thing always ignorant
old
people
,
some
old
people
knowledge
is
enough
and their direction is sensible, they
see
the right choices for
young
people
To sum up
Young
people
need listen elderly
people
,
because
they
has
not a efficient
knowledge
.
But
must
be a careful where it
take
advice. They do not trust
blindly
, always resource true information. If apply these
think
, new generation prepare for modern life
truely
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IELTS essay [21: 39, 17. 02. 2022] Emre Koçyiğit: Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the corret way of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that it is not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life in the future. Whats your opinion?

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