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Requesting for the tickets for performance

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing to you to ask for help with the tickets for the performance, which will take place in London on Friday evening. From my childhood I had a dream to watch the Shakespeare's play in his own theater. As I am a teacher at school and live in Uzbekistan, there is a great opportunity for us (the teachers) visit the United kingdom. We will be there only 3 days, so, I, definitely, want to the Hamlet tragedy, to make my dream come true. I've heard, that you work in this theater and could get the tickets for any performance. Please, help to watch the play of my life. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, John Kerry
Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing to you to
ask for
help
with the tickets for the performance, which will take place in London on Friday evening. From my childhood I had a dream to
watch
the Shakespeare's play in his
own
theater. As I am a teacher at school and
live
in Uzbekistan, there is a great opportunity for us (the teachers) visit the
United kingdom
. We will be there
only
3 days,
so
, I, definitely, want to the Hamlet tragedy, to
make
my dream
come
true. I've heard, that you work in this theater and could
get
the tickets for any performance.
Please
,
help
to
watch
the play of my life. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely
, John Kerry

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