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Some people think that parents should read stories to their children while other argue that this is no longer necessary as we have modern technology such as television and films . discuss both views and give own opinion.

It is a knowledgeable fact that it is thought by number of people that care takers ought to tell stories of their kids can read books and watching movies by themselves. In this essay, I will explicate both the viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs along with relevant examples. To commence with, it is certainly true that if parents should read stories to their children, it would not only fruitful to enhance the creativity power but also help to become more interest on their academic life. In other words, juveniles cannot be mature to understand difficult levels so that with the aid of telling stories they can easily handle this type of satituons and also learn new skills. In India, for instance, the intensive study of journalism proved that one-third of old people who can always give advice to parents to teach children good moral values, which are used for them to improve understanding level. Hence, it can be clearly seen that whenever care takers tell stories of their kids, which would helpful to boost up creativity power. However, there are amples of points to support opponents viewpoints. firstly, In this cutting edge era children various types of way to relaxation as well as entertainment you. when guidance should allow to their pupils to watch movies on televisions, children can become more independent and more mature then their peers. For example, a survey conducted by Oxford University reported that 65 present of of pupils who can get high name and fame in their life only due to watching using technological gadgets. Thus, it has been noticed that with the aid of watching movies on televisions children become more independent, which would banefits to bright their future. To conclude, it is quite clear that although youngsters can read books as well as watch television by themselves to become independent, I believe that they still need. the stories by care takers to be fully grown.
It is a knowledgeable fact that it is
thought
by number of
people
that care takers ought to
tell
stories of their kids can
read
books and watching movies by themselves. In this essay, I will explicate both the viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs along with relevant examples. To commence with, it is
certainly
true that if parents should
read
stories to their children, it would not
only
fruitful to enhance the creativity power
but
also
help
to become more interest on their academic life.
In other words
, juveniles cannot be mature to understand difficult levels
so
that with the aid of telling stories they can
easily
handle this type of
satituons
and
also
learn new
skills
. In India,
for instance
, the intensive study of journalism proved that one-third of
old
people
who can always give advice to parents to teach children
good
moral values, which are
used
for them to
improve
understanding level.
Hence
, it can be
clearly
seen
that whenever care takers
tell
stories of their kids, which would helpful to boost up creativity power.
However
, there are
amples
of points to support opponents viewpoints.
firstly
, In this cutting edge era children various types of way to relaxation
as well
as entertainment you.
when
guidance should
allow
to their pupils to
watch
movies on televisions, children can become more independent and more mature
then
their peers.
For example
, a survey conducted by Oxford University reported that 65 present
of of
pupils who can
get
high name and fame in their life
only
due to watching using technological gadgets.
Thus
, it has
been noticed
that with the aid of watching movies on televisions children become more independent, which would
banefits
to bright their future.
To conclude
, it is quite
clear
that although youngsters can
read
books
as well
as
watch
television by themselves to become independent, I believe that they
still
need.
the
stories by care takers to be
fully
grown.

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