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Some people believe you people have knowledge about international pop and movie stars but less much have their own famous people. Why is this? How can be created interests among them?

Some perceive that today's young generation have knowledge about international pop as well as movie stars too much but they do not know much about the famous people who belong to their own country. There are some reasons behind them. Among them the lack of representation of famous people from responsible person is one. To create interests among them for knowing their own people of their own history, Managements have to make platform and have to represent them fully.
The people who have responsibilities to introduce their own film stars and pop stars cannot do their duty properly. And also they have a lack of awareness about it. As a result, their own young people do not have much ideas about their own famous persons. For instance, young people of Bangladesh do not know about the popular singer James who is well known but they know about Micheal Jackson. Because Bangladeshi media cannot hold them with care. They have lack of platform. Consequently, adult use internet and learn very easily and at fast about other's countries ' popular person. This problem can be solved by making platform a lot. More concerts and events have to be organized where stars will perform. They have to be presented in a attractive way, helping to create curiosity among young's. If it is executed, the knowledge will be grown. So, this way young can know their own's famous. To sum up, in present day's young do not carry much interests about their own popular movie stars and singers, though they know about international's due to lack of representation them but creating events or platforms is the solution which can be taken.
Some
perceive that
today
's young generation have knowledge about international pop
as well
as movie stars too much
but
they do not know much about the famous people who belong to their
own
country. There are
some
reasons behind them. Among them the lack of representation of famous people from responsible person is one. To create interests among them for knowing their
own
people of their
own
history, Managements
have to
make
platform and
have to
represent them
fully
.

The people who have responsibilities to introduce their
own
film stars and pop stars cannot do their duty
properly
. And
also
they have a lack of awareness about it.
As a result
, their
own
young people do not have
much
ideas
about their
own
famous persons.
For instance
, young people of Bangladesh do not know about the popular singer James who is well known
but
they know about Micheal Jackson.
Because
Bangladeshi media cannot hold them with care. They have lack of platform.
Consequently
, adult
use
internet and learn
very
easily
and at
fast
about other's countries
'
popular person. This problem can
be solved
by making platform a lot. More concerts and
events
have to
be organized
where stars will perform. They
have to
be presented
in a attractive way
, helping to create curiosity among young's. If it
is executed
, the knowledge will
be grown
.
So
, this way young can know their
own's
famous. To sum up, in present day's young do not carry
much
interests about their
own
popular movie stars and singers, though they know about international's due to lack of representation them
but
creating
events
or platforms is the solution which can
be taken
.

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