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Nowadays children are taught to push themselves to try and outshine better than their classmates rather than work in peer groups so do you think advantage outweighs disadvantage

Nowadays children are taught to push themsevlus to try and outshine better than their class mates rather that work in group in my opinion the advantage outweigh disadvantageFirstly most parents believe that making their child more competitive in studies than other students as in turn their academic results would be improved. this thought is true to some extent because being competitive at an early age would help the children to gain and face competition in the future they become more concentrated and can develop their personality for instance a competitive student can achieve excellent grades in studies Secondly most parents are driven by the society getting less grades in studies would cause them prestige issues The greatest benefits of studying in a competitive classroom is that the student will get help to face the real world challenges and competition at an early age. exposure to competition with help the student to easily adapt the tough competitions. On the other hand students would fail to learn how to work in a team However competition between team could can be an effective method for student to experience team work for instance in football which require every member to work, and play together to achieve their goal hence students can work cooperately as a team in a classroom to achieve their goalsIn conclusion if a child can help himself or herself in a competition at an early age definitely he could gain and achieve their goals in the near future.
Nowadays children
are taught
to push
themsevlus
to
try and
outshine better than their
class
mates
rather
that work in group in my opinion the advantage outweigh
disadvantageFirstly
most parents believe that making their child more competitive in studies than other
students
as in turn their academic results would be
improved
.
this
thought
is true to
some
extent
because
being competitive at an early age would help the children to gain and face competition in the future they become more concentrated and can develop their personality
for instance
a competitive
student
can achieve excellent grades in studies
Secondly
most parents
are driven
by the society getting
less
grades in studies would cause them prestige issues The greatest benefits of studying in a competitive classroom is that the
student
will
get
help to face the real world challenges and competition at an early age.
exposure
to competition with help the
student
to
easily
adapt the tough competitions.
On the other hand
students
would fail to learn how to work in a team
However
competition between team
could can
be an effective method for
student
to experience team work
for instance
in football which require every member to work, and play together to achieve their goal
hence
students
can work
cooperately
as a team in a classroom to achieve their
goalsIn
conclusion if a child can help himself or herself in a competition at an early age definitely he could gain and achieve their goals in the near future.

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