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In today’s world, advertisements are exposed to the society. This trend brings advantages or disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Across the world, the wide use of the Internet, together with the ubiquity of billboard, poster, and television commercials have emphasized the central role of advertisement. Discussion has centered on whether or not this emerging trend effect consumers’ choice and lifestyle. From my personal perspective, I believe advertisement is so associated with the modern world and that it has a positive impact.
Admittedly no sensible person can deny that the proliferation of commercials Khalid to innumerable negative aspects. Unarguably, since children are the most vulnerable age group to advertisements, advertisers usually aim their marketing strategies at them. Having been seduced by the commercials, tonight will keep pestering and nagging their parents to meet their demand. In addition to this, companies also use images which are unattainable in their commercials to make viewers believe that their social status status will increase when they buy companies’ products. Consequently, This has lead to feelings of alienation in people who do not have an enormous amount of money to spend.
On the other hand, I approve with those who consider advertising is a creative way to convey information that undoubtedly companies can make use of this method to introduce the products to be customers. Take a milk company as a compelling example they can use commercial to inform viewers about the various options they have to select from. This argument is further the strengthened by the fact that since advertisements are intertwined in peoples’ everyday life, The government has make full use of district citizens awareness about recent problems. Issues such as abuse, drunk driving, texting while driving, sexual harassment have been advertised everywhere so that they could be alleviated.
For the form mentioned information, it can be affirmed that even though commercials can influence viewers by introducing false images, their roles are unarguably significant in today’s world.
Across the
world
, the wide
use
of the Internet, together with the ubiquity of billboard, poster, and television commercials have emphasized the central role of advertisement. Discussion has centered on
whether or not
this emerging trend effect consumers’ choice and lifestyle. From my personal perspective, I believe advertisement is
so
associated with the modern
world
and that it has a
positive
impact.

Admittedly
no sensible person can deny that the proliferation of commercials Khalid to innumerable
negative
aspects.
Unarguably
, since children are the most vulnerable age group to advertisements, advertisers
usually
aim their marketing strategies at them. Having
been seduced
by the commercials, tonight will
keep
pestering and nagging their parents to
meet
their demand.
In addition
to this, companies
also
use
images which are unattainable in their commercials to
make
viewers believe that their social
status status
will increase when they
buy
companies’ products.
Consequently
, This has lead to feelings of alienation in
people
who do not have an enormous amount of money to spend.

On the other hand
, I approve with those who consider advertising is a creative way to convey information that
undoubtedly
companies can
make
use
of this method to introduce the products to be customers. Take a milk company as a compelling example they can
use
commercial to inform viewers about the various options they
have to
select from. This argument is
further
the strengthened by the fact that since advertisements
are intertwined
in peoples’ everyday life, The
government
has
make
full
use
of district
citizens
awareness about recent problems. Issues such as abuse, drunk driving, texting while driving, sexual harassment have
been advertised
everywhere
so
that they could
be alleviated
.

For the form mentioned information, it can
be affirmed
that
even though
commercials can influence viewers by introducing false images, their roles are
unarguably
significant in
today
’s
world
.

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