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men and women physical activities in australia

The graph compares Australian men and women physical activity percentage in 2010. It can be clearly seen that both fluctuated over the ages of two sex.
Overall, women are doing regular physical activities more then men from the age 25 to over. On contrary, men doing more physical activities between ages 15 and 24. Activity of women is started 47. 7 percent and it slowly inclined until its peak value 53. 3 percent at age between 45 and 54. After that it reversed and started to slowly declined.
In contrast, men’s activity is started with its peak value and decreased until ages between 35 and 44. It is its minimum percentage with 39. 5. After this age interval, men’s activity is slowly increased, on contrary it has never passed women activity. Men and women have almost same percentage of activity at the last age interval.
To sum up, men’s activity was started with its maximum value and fluctuated over ages. However, women’s activity has peak at interval 45 to 54. Before and after this value, it did not fluctuate. It just climbed up and declined down.
The graph compares Australian men and women physical activity percentage in 2010. It can be
clearly
seen
that both fluctuated over the ages of two sex.

Overall
, women are doing regular physical activities more
then
men from the age 25 to over. On contrary, men doing more physical activities between ages 15 and 24. Activity of women is started 47. 7 percent and it slowly inclined until its peak value 53. 3 percent at age between 45 and 54. After that it reversed and started to slowly declined.

In contrast
, men’s activity is started with its peak value and decreased until ages between 35 and 44. It is its minimum percentage with 39. 5. After this age interval, men’s activity is slowly increased, on contrary it has never passed women activity. Men and women have almost same percentage of activity at the last age interval.

To sum up, men’s activity was started with its maximum value and fluctuated over ages.
However
, women’s activity has peak at interval 45 to 54.
Before
and after this value, it did not fluctuate. It
just
climbed up and declined down.

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