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Bar chart shows attendees of classes

The bar chart depicts how many females and males took part in several evening courses at an education center for adults in 2009. The pie chart illustrates the age ranges of those attendees.
It is obvious that there were more women than men in those evening classes. Besides, the older people got, the more they enrolled in evening extra courses.
We can see in the bar chart that the number of female learners doubled that of males in Drama and Language courses (40 compared to 20 and, 20 compared to 10). In the Painting course, there were 55 people in which females and males accounted for 30 and 25 respectively. Only in Sculpture class did the number of men outnumbered that of women the other.
The pie chart shows that people over 50 ranked first in the total number of class attendance at 42%. Followings were the 40-49, 30-39, 20-29 age groups at 26%, 16%, 11% sequentially. Under 20, whose figure was only 5%, was the age when people did not pay much attention to in joining those courses.
The bar chart depicts how
many
females and males
took part
in several evening courses at an education center for adults in 2009. The pie chart illustrates the age ranges of those attendees.

It is obvious that there were more women than
men
in those evening classes.
Besides
, the older people
got
, the more they enrolled in evening extra courses.

We can
see
in the bar chart that the number of female learners doubled that of males in Drama and Language courses (40 compared to 20 and, 20 compared to 10). In the Painting course, there were 55 people in which females and males accounted for 30 and 25
respectively
.
Only
in Sculpture class did the number of
men
outnumbered that of women the other.

The pie chart
shows
that people over 50 ranked
first
in the total number of class attendance at 42%. Followings were the 40-49, 30-39, 20-29 age groups at 26%, 16%, 11%
sequentially
. Under 20, whose figure was
only
5%, was the age when people did not pay much attention to in joining those courses.

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