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You'll never be content. You'll never be content.

You'll never be content. You'll never be content. qmJWP
You’ll never be content. Everything that you do will lead you to only one place. Boredom. Everything will bore you in one way or another. Everything tangible or materialistic you wish for, will one way or another bore you. That dream car that you really want, that house that you really wish you had, that new phone that looks absolutely magnificent on the shelf, It will all BORE YOU. This is nothing new, nothing to disprove or argue, it’s just factually the truth. A human being will always strive for something better, bigger, louder, tastier. So called hedonistic treadmill. People will always seek something better, and it’s absolutely ok and there is no "treatment" needed. The only thing you can do is to be happy right now, be happy with the things you have right NOW. You should understand the concept that somebody doesn't even have the bare minimum in life, the first floor in Maslow's hierarchy, not everyone has even daily water access or food or some people on this globe doesn't even have the right for freedom the day they are born. So everytime you feel dissatisfied with how life goes, understand that it's a natural but rather irrational feeling to have. You will never achieve true happiness in life until you learn to be content with the things you possess right now. It does not matter what you possess or how many figures you earn. Gratitude is the only way to be truly happy. We live in the easiest times ever. Our ancestors could only dream about the circumstances we have right now. Despite having a strange time indeed, we have all the amenities that only kings and most wealthiest one’s could have in ancient times. We can read almost every book, listen to every performance, see all paintings that were ever drawn throughout human history. You are lucky to read this as a person, truly lucky because your ancestors couldn’t even read properly, they were only working and trying to feed their only family, not knowing what the future is like and what awaits them tomorrow. We as a generation can access almost every piece of art or knowledge known to humankind. Tens of generations, thousands of people were before you, so many emotions and pain filled only for you at the end to read this exact passage, this exact sentence. Can you feel how insignificant you are compared to the inevitable loop that every human participates in? Your problems in the galactic scale are nothing. But yet, they are still very painful to you. Because the galaxy doesn’t care, it doesn’t feel it. Galaxy does not have any emotions, but you do. That is the burden of human consciousness. We can’t fight it, unfortunately. We can only grasp the burden and go on with our lives. Be grateful for what you have and strive for truly meaningful things. Experiences, relationships, love and knowledge are things that are truly valuable. Experience the thing that we call “life” and wait for the mechanical hand to end it. There is a chance that you will continue your bloodline, only continuing the pain of human existence that is going on for a seemingly endless amount of time. But you will get a false sense of purpose in your monotonous existence, truly a thing to strive for, am i right?
You’ll never be content. Everything that you do will lead you to
only
one place. Boredom. Everything will
bore
you in one way or another.
Everything
tangible or materialistic you wish for, will one way or another bore you. That dream car that you
really
want, that
house
that you
really
wish you had, that new phone that looks
absolutely
magnificent on the shelf, It will all BORE YOU. This is nothing new, nothing to disprove or argue, it’s
just
factually
the truth. A
human
being will always strive for something better, bigger, louder, tastier.
So called
hedonistic treadmill.
People
will always seek something better, and it’s
absolutely
ok and there is no
"
treatment
"
needed. The
only
thing you can do is to be happy
right
now
, be happy with the things you have
right
NOW
. You should understand the concept that somebody doesn't even have the bare minimum in
life
, the
first
floor in Maslow's hierarchy, not everyone has even daily water access or food or
some
people
on this globe doesn't even have the
right
for freedom the day they
are born
.
So
everytime
you feel dissatisfied with how
life
goes, understand that it's a natural
but
rather
irrational feeling to have. You will never achieve true happiness in
life
until you learn to be content with the things you possess
right
now
. It does not matter what you possess or how
many
figures you earn. Gratitude is the
only
way to be
truly
happy. We
live
in the easiest
times
ever. Our ancestors could
only
dream about the circumstances we have
right
now
. Despite having a strange
time
indeed
, we have all the amenities that
only
kings and
most wealthiest
one’s could have in ancient
times
. We can
read
almost every book, listen to every performance,
see
all paintings that were ever drawn throughout
human
history. You are lucky to
read
this as a person,
truly
lucky
because
your ancestors couldn’t even
read
properly
, they were
only
working and trying to feed their
only
family, not knowing what the future is like and what awaits them tomorrow. We as a generation can access almost every piece of art or knowledge known to humankind. Tens of generations, thousands of
people
were
before
you,
so
many
emotions and pain filled
only
for you at the
end
to
read
this exact passage, this exact sentence. Can you feel how insignificant you
are compared
to the inevitable loop that every
human
participates in? Your problems in the galactic scale are nothing.
But
yet
, they are
still
very
painful to you.
Because
the galaxy doesn’t care, it doesn’t feel it. Galaxy does not have any emotions,
but
you do.
That is
the burden of
human
consciousness. We can’t fight it, unfortunately. We can
only
grasp the burden and go on with our
lives
. Be grateful for what you have and strive for
truly
meaningful things. Experiences, relationships,
love
and knowledge are things that are
truly
valuable. Experience the thing that we call
“life”
and wait for the mechanical hand to
end
it. There is a chance that you will continue your bloodline,
only
continuing the pain of
human
existence
that is
going on for a
seemingly
endless amount of
time
.
But
you will
get
a false sense of purpose in your monotonous existence,
truly
a thing to strive for, am
i
right
?
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