You recently organised a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make
You recently organised a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make JQKn0
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the party that my company held at your hotel last weekend.
The event commemorated our company’s 20th anniversary, and all two hundred staff
members from across the country were invited. I am pleased to say that everything went
according to plan and it was a thoroughly enjoyable and memorable evening.
We were particularly impressed by the hotel personnel on the night, including waiters, bar
staff and members of the events team. They were friendly, welcoming and attentive, and
they ensured that the party ran smoothly.
Perhaps I could make one or two suggestions for future events. First, a little more care
could have been taken with decorations in the events room; for example, it would have
been nice to see more balloons. Second, a few people struggled to find the events room
when they arrived, so you might consider improving your signage in the hotel.
On behalf of all of my colleagues, I would like to thank you and your team for hosting such
a special event.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the party that my
company
held at your hotel last weekend.
The
event
commemorated our
company
’s 20th anniversary, and all two hundred staff
members from across the country
were invited
. I am
pleased
to say that everything went
according to plan and it was a
thoroughly
enjoyable and memorable evening.
We were
particularly
impressed by the hotel personnel on the night, including waiters, bar
staff and members of the
events
team. They were friendly, welcoming and attentive, and
they ensured that the party ran
smoothly
.
Perhaps I could
make
one or two suggestions for future
events
.
First
, a
little
more care
could have
been taken
with decorations in the
events
room;
for example
, it would have
been nice to
see
more balloons. Second, a few
people
struggled to find the
events
room
when they arrived,
so
you might consider improving your signage in the hotel.
On behalf of all of my colleagues, I would like to thank you and your team for hosting such
a special
event
.
Yours
faithfully
,
John Smith
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