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The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrician and motorists, governments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrician and motorists, governments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport. BQY1d
Land is the common form of transport for humans when travelling from one destination to another in the same country and sometimes even when crossing borders. Among them rise in usage of vehicles such a cars could be observed in the modern society. There are many possible reasons for this choice and among them convenice ranks number one. But along with this usages comes many negative factors such as contribution to increasing global warming and danger to humans like, pedestrician and motorists. Its important to look closely into these matters and proper measures to be takes without futher due. It is more common to hear many accidents, loss of life and hospitalized drivers in our news channels more often. This is mainly due to speed driving, carless and irrespoinsible driving, drivers lack of knowledge on road rules and drunk driving few reasons out of many. As of a result of these actions, the effect is mainly on poor children, people walking on the road and motorists. These people even when road rules are obeyed, have to pay with their lives, loose body parts becoming disabled or loose their favourite and hard earned vehicle. Indeed mistakes happen on the road when driving and careless pedestrians or carless motor bike drivers could be also seen. To minimize the dangers with such above actions, immediate strict rules need to be imposed. Disobeying such rules should give the party responsible maximum punishement to avoid any further similar dangers. The gas emited by the engines of the vehicles release Nitrogen, which is a green house gas when combined with the gases in atmosphere. This in turn results for increase in Global Warming where the world is affected to a greater extend. The world is h]getting hotter day by day and possibility of harmful gases mixed on the breathing air is increasing. Moreover, sound pollusion is another environmental impact carried out by the increase of cars on roads. It damages the eco-system to a bigger extend. So its important for government of every country to inspect vehicles well before approval of them to be driven on roads is granted. Examples; eco tests should be compulsory for all vehicles before grating the vehicle licence to ensure less nitrogen is released. It is also important to advice about the possible environmental effects to car owners on regular basic and also encourage to countries other form of transport like trains or buses for their day to day activities. This will minimize the amount of vehicles on the road and inreturn help to protect our envieronment. Most importantly it is important for the people responsible in the country to build the public transport effecetient to get the maximum advantage, and people to prefer it over riding their own vehicles. Driving a car on the road is not a danger when it is handled well both by the driver and the country itself. Proper knowledge to the drivers is need to be given also the possible ngetaive outcomes of environmental pollusion. Encouraging public transport while building more comfortable, effiecient and prefereable system will encourage the use of it.
Land is the common form of
transport
for humans when travelling from one destination to another in the same
country
and
sometimes
even when crossing borders. Among them rise in usage of
vehicles
such a
cars
could
be observed
in the modern society. There are
many
possible reasons for this choice and among them
convenice
ranks number one.
But
along with this usages
comes
many
negative
factors such as contribution to increasing global warming and
danger
to humans like,
pedestrician
and motorists.
Its
important
to look
closely
into these matters and proper measures to be takes without
futher
due. It is more common to hear
many
accidents, loss of life and hospitalized
drivers
in our news channels more
often
. This is
mainly
due to speed
driving
,
carless
and
irrespoinsible
driving
,
drivers
lack of knowledge on
road
rules
and drunk
driving
few reasons out of
many
. As of a result of these actions, the effect is
mainly
on poor children,
people
walking on the
road
and motorists. These
people
even when
road
rules
are obeyed
,
have to
pay with their
lives
, loose body parts becoming disabled or
loose
their
favourite
and
hard earned
vehicle
.
Indeed
mistakes happen on the
road
when
driving
and careless pedestrians or
carless
motor bike
drivers
could be
also
seen
. To minimize the
dangers
with such above actions, immediate strict
rules
need to
be imposed
. Disobeying such
rules
should give the party responsible maximum
punishement
to avoid any
further
similar
dangers
. The gas
emited
by the engines of the
vehicles
release Nitrogen, which is a green
house
gas when combined with the gases in atmosphere. This in turn results for increase in Global Warming where the world is
affected
to a greater
extend
. The world is h
]
getting hotter day by day and possibility of harmful gases mixed on the breathing air is increasing.
Moreover
, sound
pollusion
is another environmental impact carried out by the increase of
cars
on
roads
. It damages the
eco-system
to a bigger extend.
So
its
important
for
government
of every
country
to inspect
vehicles
well
before
approval of them to
be driven
on
roads
is granted
. Examples;
eco
tests
should be compulsory for all
vehicles
before
grating the
vehicle
licence
to ensure less nitrogen
is released
. It is
also
important
to advice about the possible environmental effects to
car
owners on regular basic and
also
encourage to
countries
other form of
transport
like trains or buses for their
day to day
activities. This will minimize the amount of
vehicles
on the
road
and
inreturn
help
to protect our
envieronment
. Most
importantly
it is
important
for the
people
responsible in the
country
to build the public
transport
effecetient
to
get
the maximum advantage, and
people
to prefer it
over riding
their
own
vehicles. Driving a
car
on the
road
is not a
danger
when it
is handled
well both by the
driver
and the
country
itself. Proper knowledge to the
drivers
is need
to be
given
also
the possible
ngetaive
outcomes of environmental
pollusion
. Encouraging public
transport
while building more comfortable,
effiecient
and
prefereable
system will encourage the
use
of it.
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IELTS essay The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrician and motorists, governments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport.

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