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You have seen an advertisement in yor local newspaper requesting ideas for a local TV documentary program

You have seen an advertisement in yor local newspaper requesting ideas for a local TV documentary program dAX
Dear Sir or MadamI am wriying this letter to give my ideas for the local TV docmentary program. I am an English teacher. I work at school. In my free time I like reading newspapers and watching TV. To be quite honest, I llok through the channel programmes before watching TV. Hence there are many meaningless soap operas or any chat shows such as "Omad show" or "Adrenalin show". They are tabloid and do not fit our tradition. However, I want to watch some documentary programmes like appearing our Earth, the Sun, animals or other planets. Three days ago on my way home I saw an advert about local TV documentary programmes. I think such kind of programmes are good, futhermore, our children can learn different things about nature and our world more than other programmes. In addition, the English language is improving today so the pupils are trying to learn it with enthusiazm. Therefore, I would like to give my idea that it would be more useful for English learners If there are some programmes in Englishversion instead of any time-consuming shows. It is benefitial for the pupils'listening skills. I would be very grateful If you received my opinion. Yours faithfullyMrs Qodiralieva.
Dear Sir or
MadamI
am
wriying
this letter to give my
ideas
for the local TV
docmentary
program. I am an English teacher. I work at school. In my free time I like reading newspapers and watching TV. To be quite honest, I
llok
through the channel
programmes
before
watching TV.
Hence
there are
many
meaningless soap operas or any chat
shows
such as
"
Omad
show
"
or
"
Adrenalin
show
"
. They are tabloid and do not fit our tradition.
However
, I want to
watch
some
documentary
programmes
like appearing our Earth, the Sun, animals or other planets. Three days ago on my way home I
saw
an advert about local TV documentary
programmes
. I
think
such kind of
programmes
are
good
,
futhermore
, our children can learn
different
things about nature and our world more than other
programmes
.
In addition
, the English language is improving
today
so
the pupils are trying to learn it with
enthusiazm
.
Therefore
, I would like to give my
idea
that it would be more useful for English learners If there are
some
programmes
in
Englishversion
instead
of any time-consuming
shows
. It is
benefitial
for the pupils'listening
skills
. I would be
very
grateful If you received my opinion. Yours
faithfullyMrs
Qodiralieva
.
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in yor local newspaper requesting ideas for a local TV documentary program

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