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Write your own realistic fiction story

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Milana will never accept the guiltiness that happens in the world. She always makes debates and lectures about bringing peace to the world. But that was all in front of her mirror. Her biggest supporter was her grandpa, Arlo, that always encouraged her to find peace. But Milana knew that the biggest obstacle to finding peace was the aggressive judge, Mr. Melvin. On an unusual calm night, grandpa Arlo nearly skipped a heartbeat as he was looking in his old brown bag. Then he asked Milana about missing papers that had the rules and laws of human rights. But little did the grandpa know Milana was fast to act and started to look for evidence. Who would direct a passionate girl that wants to bring peace and justice anyway? Knowing that the only left option is Mr. Melvin, Milana hardly took a breath. “I have to do this, grandpa. It’s the only way we could bring back human rights. ” Milana said. As grandpa gave her a warm smile and said, “Go ahead, Milana, you can do this since you have that persuasive power. I believe in you. ” As Milana stood in front of the court, where Mr. Melvin works, she had a mixture of different emotions. Milana entered the huge courtroom that was full of long brown benches. She started walking straight to Mr. Melvin, where she felt that pride inside her. But Mr. Melvin directly said, “Hey hey, where do you think you are going. Go back, little girl. ” But that just made Milana more attentive and said, “Good morning, Mr. Melvin, I hope I don’t take from your time, but we need your help. ” Mr. Melvin gave no attention to Milana. “We lost the papers that had human rights, and you are the only one that can do us a favor and bring them back. ” Then, Mr. Melvin looked at her with bright eyes and said, “Wow, how amazing is that. A brilliant young lady came to bring back the laws for human rights. How proud I am. Beautiful lady, you can consider it done. ” Milana was so shocked by how easy and understanding Mr. Melvin was.
Milana
will never accept the guiltiness that happens in the world. She always
makes
debates and lectures about bringing
peace
to the world.
But
that was all in front of her mirror. Her biggest supporter was her
grandpa
,
Arlo
, that always encouraged her to find
peace
.
But
Milana
knew that the biggest obstacle to finding
peace
was the aggressive judge, Mr. Melvin. On an unusual calm night,
grandpa
Arlo
nearly
skipped a heartbeat as he was looking in his
old
brown bag. Then he asked
Milana
about missing papers that had the
rules
and laws of
human
rights
.
But
little
did the
grandpa
know
Milana
was
fast
to act and
started
to look for evidence. Who would direct a passionate girl that wants to
bring
peace
and justice anyway? Knowing that the
only
left
option is Mr. Melvin,
Milana
hardly took a breath. “I
have to
do this,
grandpa
. It’s the
only
way we could
bring
back
human
rights
. ”
Milana
said. As
grandpa
gave her a warm smile and said, “Go ahead,
Milana
, you can do this since you have that persuasive power. I believe in you. ” As
Milana
stood in front of the court, where Mr. Melvin works, she had a mixture of
different
emotions.
Milana
entered the huge courtroom that was full of long brown benches. She
started
walking straight to Mr. Melvin, where she felt that pride inside her.
But
Mr. Melvin
directly
said, “Hey hey, where do you
think
you are going. Go
back
,
little
girl. ”
But
that
just
made
Milana
more attentive and said, “
Good
morning, Mr. Melvin, I hope I don’t take from your time,
but
we need your
help
. ” Mr. Melvin gave no attention to
Milana
. “We lost the papers that had
human
rights
, and you are the
only
one that can do us a favor and
bring
them
back
. ” Then, Mr. Melvin looked at her with bright eyes and said, “Wow, how amazing is that. A brilliant young lady came to
bring
back
the laws for
human
rights
. How proud I am.
Beautiful
lady, you can consider it done. ”
Milana
was
so
shocked by how easy and understanding Mr. Melvin was.
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