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Write about a person you admire in your life.

Write about a person you admire in your life. g7JJ7
In whole of my life I see many pepole with different personalities who admire some of them for some different reasons but I never admire no one more than myself! Maybe this is like a juke but I can explain it in many good ways. First of all, I am so barve and I take risks in many aspects of my life, because I Believe that without risk I do not have any story in my life! Also when something goes wrong always take all responsibilities and individualy solve it. For instance; I got admission from university in a metropolis for my bachlor that it is so hard because I started live alone in new place when I was so young but this was very advantures for me though I have many bad days too. Another reason is, my kindness! I am very kind with every creature on the world, have pure heart and always have a big smile on my mouth. Although world it is not as beauty as I treat with it and my heart has broken many times. Sometimes | really tried to be mean with everyone but I think I do not do that actually so I think I should accept it and proud myself. At the end, It is so important who one you admire in your life because after a while that person become your legend and in my opinion it should deserve it. Then, I so proud of my self for be my ideal.
In whole of my
life
I
see
many
pepole
with
different
personalities who admire
some
of them for
some
different
reasons
but
I never admire no one more than myself! Maybe this is like a
juke
but
I can
explain
it in
many
good
ways.
First of all
, I am
so
barve
and I take
risks
in
many
aspects of my
life
,
because
I Believe that without
risk
I do not have any story in my
life
!
Also
when something goes
wrong
always take all responsibilities and
individualy
solve it.
For instance
; I
got
admission from university in a metropolis for my
bachlor
that it is
so
hard
because
I
started
live
alone in new place when I was
so
young
but
this was
very
advantures
for me though I have
many
bad
days too. Another reason is, my kindness! I am
very
kind with every creature on the world, have pure heart and always have a
big
smile on my mouth. Although world it is not as beauty as I treat with it and my heart has broken
many
times.
Sometimes
|
really
tried to be mean with everyone
but
I
think
I do not do that actually
so
I
think
I should accept it and proud myself. At the
end
, It is
so
important
who one
you admire in your
life
because
after a while that person become your legend and in my opinion it should deserve it. Then, I
so
proud of my self for be my ideal.
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