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in many countries around the world,rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.is it positive or negative?

in many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. is it positive or negative? WWwMN

It is believed that people who are moving from countryside to cities cause a decrease in the population in their home town. I totally agree with this fact, and I think it is a negative development. I understand why some rural residents tend to move to cities. A compelling reason is that they want better job opportunities. Unfortunately, the most famous and successful companies are located in cities. Take a rural graduate student as an example who delves into new experiences and has a high-level occupation, which is what he wants. I, however, believe that the cost of living and housing in an urbanized city is extremely high, and sometimes it is not affordable by average income. In rural areas, although the incomes are not comparable to those in city centers, the expenses are very low. Furthermore, in this civilization, people have to be tolerant in order to they are under enormous pressure in the urbanized lifestyle. For example, sticking in a terrible traffic jam, especially in the mornings, puts people in a very stressful situation. In conclusion, all humans are looking for a peaceful life,

It is believed
 that people
 who are moving from countryside to cities
 cause a decrease in the population in their home town. I totally
agree
 with this fact, and I think
 it is a negative
 development.

I understand why some
 rural residents tend to move
 to cities
. A compelling reason is that they want better job opportunities. Unfortunately, the most famous
 and successful companies
are located
 in cities
. Take a rural graduate student as an example who delves into new experiences and has a high-level occupation, which is what he wants.

I, however
, believe that the cost of living and housing in an urbanized city is extremely
 high, and sometimes
 it is not affordable by average income. In rural areas, although the incomes are not comparable to those in city centers, the expenses are very
 low.

Furthermore
, in this civilization, people
have to
 be tolerant in order to they are under enormous pressure in the urbanized lifestyle. For example
, sticking in a terrible traffic jam, especially
 in the mornings, puts people
 in a very
 stressful situation.

In conclusion
, all humans are looking for a peaceful life, 

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