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Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain what experience and special skills you have- tell him/her when you think you could startWrite at least 150 words.

Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain what experience and special skills you have- tell him/her when you think you could start 02XmB
Dear Manager, My name is Allen Cooper, and am studying for Masters degree in Sports Management at the University of Toronto. I would be interested in applying for a part time job as a football coach in your club. I am really passionate about sports, and had the honour of coaching the State Junior football team in Hyderabad for three years (ie from Jan 2017 to Dec 2019). My team won three cups at the Inter-state championship for two years in a row, it was not easy as we had some new players in the team. I made a plan for each player to work on, based on their performance, strength and weakness. I have also done some courses in Team management, Leadership skills, and read some books like 'How to Win', 'How to influence others', and 'Magic in Believing'. These have helped me in coaching and mentoring the team. Your club is one of the best to work with, and I would love to be a part of the success stories ahead. I can start working from 1st May, and available to work during the evening time from 4 pm to 6 pm. Please let me know if you have any queries. Best RegardsAllen Cooper
Dear Manager, My name is Allen Cooper, and am studying for Masters degree in Sports Management at the University of Toronto. I would
be interested
in applying for a part time job as a football coach in your club. I am
really
passionate about sports, and had the honour of coaching the State Junior football
team
in Hyderabad for three years (ie from Jan 2017 to Dec 2019). My
team
won three cups at the Inter-state championship for two years in a row, it was not easy as we had
some
new players in the
team
. I made a plan for each player to work on, based on their performance, strength and weakness. I have
also
done
some
courses in
Team
management, Leadership
skills
, and read
some
books like 'How to Win', 'How to influence others', and 'Magic in Believing'. These have
helped
me in coaching and mentoring the team. Your club is one of the best to work with, and I would
love
to be a part of the success stories ahead. I can
start
working from 1st May, and available to work during the evening time from 4 pm to 6 pm.
Please
let
me know if you have any queries. Best RegardsAllen Cooper
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