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Why we need to protect polar bears

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Polar bears are being increasingly threatened by the effects of climate change, but their disappearance could have far-reaching consequences. They are uniquely adapted to the extreme conditions of the Arctic Circle, where temperatures can reach -40°C. One reason for this is that they have up to 11 centimetres of fat underneath their skin. Humans with comparative levels of adipose tissue would be considered obese and would be likely to suffer from diabetes and heart disease. Yet the polar bear experiences no such consequences. A 2014 study by Shi Ping Liu and colleagues sheds light on this mystery. They compared the genetic structure of polar bears with that of their closest relatives from a warmer climate, the brown bears. This allowed them to determine the genes that have allowed polar bears to survive in one of the toughest environments on Earth. Liu and his colleagues found the polar bears had a gene known as APoB, which reduces levels of low-density lipoproteins (LDLs) – a form of ‘bad’ cholesterol. In humans, mutations of this gene are associated with increased risk of heart disease. Polar bears may therefore be an important study model to understand heart disease in humans. The genome of the polar bear may also provide the solution for another condition, one that particularly affects our older generation: osteoporosis. This is a disease where bones show reduced density, usually caused by insufficient exercise, reduced calcium intake or food starvation. Bone tissue is constantly being remodelled, meaning that bone is added or removed, depending on nutrient availability and the stress that the bone is under. Female polar bears, however, undergo extreme conditions during every pregnancy. Once autumn comes around, these females will dig maternity dens in the snow and will remain there throughout the winter, both before and after the birth of their cubs. This process results in about six months of fasting, where the female bears have to keep themselves and their cubs alive, depleting their own calcium and calorie reserves. Despite this, their bones remain strong and dense. Physiologists Alanda Lennox and Allen Goodship found an explanation for this paradox in 2008. They discovered that pregnant bears were able to increase the density of their bones before they started to build their dens. In addition, six months later, when they finally emerged from the den with their cubs, there was no evidence of significant loss of bone density. Hibernating brown bears do not have this capacity and must therefore resort to major bone reformation in the following spring. If the mechanism of bone remodelling in polar bears can be understood, many bedridden humans, and even astronauts, could potentially benefit. The medical benefits of the polar bear for humanity certainly have their importance in our conservation efforts, but these should not be the only factors taken into consideration. We tend to want to protect animals we think are intelligent and possess emotions, such as elephants and primates. Bears, on the other hand, seem to be perceived as stupid and in many cases violent. And yet anecdotal evidence from the field challenges those assumptions, suggesting for example that polar bears have good problem-solving abilities. A male bear called GoGo in Tennoji Zoo, Osaka, has even been observed making use of a tool to manipulate his environment. The bear used a tree branch on multiple occasions to dislodge a piece of meat hung out of his reach. Problem-solving ability has also been witnessed in wild polar bears, although not as obviously as with GoGo. A calculated move by a male bear involved running and jumping onto barrels in an attempt to get to a photographer standing on a platform four metres high. In other studies, such as one by Alison Ames in 2008, polar bears showed deliberate and focused manipulation. For example, Ames observed bears putting objects in piles and then knocking them over in what appeared to be a game. The study demonstrates that bears are capable of agile and thought-out behaviours. These examples suggest bears have greater creativity and problem-solving abilities than previously thought. As for emotions, while the evidence is once again anecdotal, many bears have been seen to hit out at ice and snow – seemingly out of frustration – when they have just missed out on a kill. Moreover, polar bears can form unusual relationships with other species, including playing with the dogs used to pull sleds in the Arctic. Remarkably, one hand-raised polar bear called Agee has formed a close relationship with her owner Mark Dumas to the point where they even swim together. This is even more astonishing since polar bears are known to actively hunt humans in the wild. If climate change were to lead to their extinction, this would mean not only the loss of potential breakthroughs in human medicine, but more importantly, the disappearance of an intelligent, majestic animal.
Polar
bears
are being
increasingly
threatened by the effects of climate
change
,
but
their disappearance could have far-reaching consequences. They are
uniquely
adapted to the extreme conditions of the Arctic Circle, where temperatures can reach
-40°C
. One reason for this is that they have up to 11
centimetres
of
fat
underneath their skin.
Humans
with comparative levels of adipose tissue would
be considered
obese and would be likely to suffer from diabetes and heart
disease
.
Yet
the
polar
bear
experiences no such consequences. A 2014
study
by Shi Ping Liu and colleagues sheds light on this mystery. They compared the genetic structure of
polar
bears
with that of their closest relatives from a warmer climate, the brown
bears
. This
allowed
them to determine the genes that have
allowed
polar
bears
to survive in one of the toughest environments on Earth. Liu and his colleagues found the
polar
bears
had a gene known as
APoB
, which
reduces
levels of low-density lipoproteins (
LDLs
)
a form of ‘
bad
’ cholesterol. In
humans
, mutations of this gene
are associated
with increased
risk
of heart
disease
.
Polar
bears
may
therefore
be an
important
study
model to understand heart
disease
in humans. The genome of the
polar
bear
may
also
provide the solution for another condition, one that
particularly
affects our older generation: osteoporosis. This is a
disease
where
bones
show
reduced
density,
usually
caused by insufficient exercise,
reduced
calcium intake or food starvation.
Bone
tissue is
constantly
being
remodelled
, meaning that
bone
is
added
or removed, depending on nutrient availability and the
stress
that the
bone
is under. Female
polar
bears
,
however
, undergo extreme conditions during every pregnancy. Once autumn
comes
around, these females will dig maternity dens in the snow and will remain there throughout the winter, both
before
and after the birth of their cubs. This process results in about six months of fasting, where the female
bears
have to
keep
themselves and their cubs alive, depleting their
own
calcium and calorie reserves. Despite this, their
bones
remain strong and dense. Physiologists
Alanda
Lennox and Allen
Goodship
found an explanation for this paradox in 2008. They discovered that pregnant
bears
were able to increase the density of their
bones
before
they
started
to build their dens.
In addition
, six months later, when they
finally
emerged from the den with their cubs, there was no evidence of significant loss of
bone
density. Hibernating brown
bears
do not have this capacity and
must
therefore
resort to major
bone
reformation in the following spring. If the mechanism of
bone
remodelling
in
polar
bears
can
be understood
,
many
bedridden
humans
, and even astronauts, could
potentially
benefit. The medical benefits of the
polar
bear
for humanity
certainly
have their importance in our conservation efforts,
but
these should not be the
only
factors taken into consideration. We tend to want to protect animals we
think
are intelligent and possess emotions, such as elephants and primates.
Bears
,
on the other hand
, seem to
be perceived
as stupid and in
many
cases violent. And
yet
anecdotal evidence from the field challenges those assumptions, suggesting
for example
that
polar
bears
have
good
problem-solving abilities. A male
bear
called
GoGo
in
Tennoji
Zoo, Osaka, has even
been observed
making
use
of a tool to manipulate his environment. The
bear
used
a tree branch on multiple occasions to dislodge a piece of meat hung out of his reach. Problem-solving ability has
also
been witnessed
in wild
polar
bears
, although not as
obviously
as with
GoGo
. A calculated
move
by a male
bear
involved running and jumping onto barrels in an attempt to
get
to a photographer standing on a platform four
metres
high. In other
studies
, such as one by Alison Ames in 2008,
polar
bears
showed
deliberate and focused manipulation.
For example
, Ames observed
bears
putting objects in piles and then knocking them over in what appeared to be a game. The
study
demonstrates that
bears
are capable of agile and
thought
-out
behaviours
. These examples suggest
bears
have greater creativity and problem-solving abilities than previously
thought
. As for emotions, while the evidence is once again anecdotal,
many
bears
have been
seen
to hit out at ice and snow
seemingly
out of frustration
when they have
just
missed out on a kill.
Moreover
,
polar
bears
can form unusual relationships with other species, including playing with the dogs
used
to pull sleds in the Arctic.
Remarkably
, one hand-raised
polar
bear
called
Agee
has formed a close relationship with her owner Mark Dumas to the point where they even swim together. This is even more astonishing since
polar
bears
are known
to
actively
hunt
humans
in the wild. If climate
change
were to lead to their extinction, this would mean not
only
the loss of potential breakthroughs in
human
medicine,
but
more
importantly
, the disappearance of an intelligent, majestic animal.
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