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WHAT KIND OF JOB DO YOU DO? DO YOU ENJOY IT? WHY?

WHAT KIND OF JOB DO YOU DO? DO YOU ENJOY IT? WHY? jLxBX
I’m graduate in business strategies and management and since I started to study economy I always desire to work in a bank because I really love finance and everything that relates to financial world and institutions. After my graduation in July 2020, I started to work in Poste Italiane as Financial advisor in April 2021. During this work experience I was engaged in the commercial proposition of financial products and services of my company, by working in Postal Office of Castellaneta, that is a small city in the east province of Taranto, it is known as the born city of Rodolfo Valentino I also obtained the IVASS enabling that allow me to underwrite insurance products. IVASS, in Italy is the Authority that controls and monitoring the regular operation of the insurance market. I worked for this company for 8 months, until November 2022 when I finally started to work in a bank called BCC San Marzano by the name of the city where it was founded in the 1965. Currently I’m working in this company as retail banker and I do front-office and customer service activities about the most commons banking and financial operations as money withdrawals and deposits, bills and invoices payments through bank transfer and so on. I also do back-office activities finalized to the placement of insurance and investments products. I really love this job, despite it busy me from Monday to Friday for almost 10 hours per day, but I am very passionate with finance, because I think the finance moves the world and being part of this is for me a dream that comes true.
I’m graduate in business strategies and management and since I
started
to study economy I always desire to
work
in a bank
because
I
really
love
finance and everything that relates to
financial
world and institutions. After my graduation in July 2020, I
started
to
work
in Poste Italiane as
Financial
advisor in April 2021. During this
work
experience I
was engaged
in the commercial proposition of
financial
products and services of my
company
, by working in Postal Office of Castellaneta,
that is
a
small
city in the east province of Taranto, it
is known
as the born city of Rodolfo Valentino I
also
obtained the IVASS enabling that
allow
me to underwrite insurance products. IVASS, in Italy is the Authority that controls and monitoring the regular operation of the insurance market. I worked for this
company
for 8 months, until November 2022 when I
finally
started
to
work
in a bank called BCC San Marzano by the name of the city where it
was founded
in the 1965.
Currently
I’m working in this
company
as retail banker and I do front-office and customer service activities about the most commons banking and
financial
operations as money withdrawals and deposits, bills and invoices payments through bank transfer and
so
on. I
also
do back-office activities finalized to the placement of insurance and investments products. I
really
love
this job, despite it busy me from Monday to Friday for almost 10 hours per day,
but
I am
very
passionate with finance,
because
I
think
the finance
moves
the world and being part of this is for me a dream that
comes
true.
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