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Today's youth get too much too easily and this is detrimental to their future.

Today's youth get too much too easily and this is detrimental to their future. m5boA
Ever since we were old enough to understand, we have always heard this from our parents - “ During our times, we did not have even half the facilities that you are able to enjoy. ” It has become a well agreed upon notion that today’s children get everything at their beck and call. Elders complain that they hardly have to struggle for anything. However, being a part of today’s youth, I do not wholeheartedly agree with the same. While it may be true that we have been provided with all the luxuries too soon in life as compared to our parents or grandparents, isn’t that the very purpose of evolution? That the next generation lives life a little better than the previous and a lot better than the one before that? One might say that patience is not a virtue that today’s youth know because they haven’t had to wait to get the next best gadget, the next best I-phone, or that they have never really heard a ‘no’ in their life. But this is primarily because their parents have entitled them to getting the best of everything because they wouldn’t want their child to have an inferiority complex. Children are not born with the greed that is inherent in humans. They are conditioned to this behavior by the same parents who say that this will later prove to be harmful in life. With the advancement in technology and science, whose primary goal is to make life easier, the coming generations are bound to have a more comfortable life, but at the cost of the increasing competition. Just because today’s youth graduate early, start earning early and get high salaried jobs early, we should not assume that they have no struggle. We cannot be the ones giving them the luxuries and at the same time being the ones complaining about giving them an easier life. Whether or not to spoil children is in our hands. By teaching them to be humble and grateful, we can make sure that they do not have a future that is detrimental for them.
Ever since we were
old
enough
to understand, we have always heard this from our
parents
-
During our times, we did not have even half the facilities that you are able to enjoy. ” It has become a well
agreed
upon notion that
today’s
children
get
everything at their beck and call. Elders complain that they hardly
have to
struggle for anything.
However
, being a part of
today’s
youth, I do not
wholeheartedly
agree
with the same. While it may be true that we have
been provided
with all the luxuries too
soon
in
life
as compared to our
parents
or grandparents, isn’t that the
very
purpose of evolution? That the
next
generation
lives
life
a
little
better than the previous and a lot better than the one
before
that? One might say that patience is not a virtue that
today’s
youth know
because
they haven’t had to wait to
get
the
next
best gadget, the
next
best I-phone, or that they have never
really
heard a ‘no’ in their
life
.
But
this is
primarily
because
their
parents
have entitled them to getting the best of everything
because
they wouldn’t want their child to have an inferiority complex. Children are not born with the greed
that is
inherent in humans. They
are conditioned
to this behavior by the same
parents
who say that this will later prove to be harmful in
life
. With the advancement in technology and science, whose primary goal is to
make
life
easier, the coming generations
are bound
to have a more comfortable
life
,
but
at the cost of the increasing competition.
Just
because
today’s
youth graduate early,
start
earning early and
get
high salaried jobs early, we should not assume that they have no struggle. We cannot be the ones giving them the luxuries and at the same time being the ones complaining about giving them an easier
life
.
Whether or not
to spoil children is in our hands. By teaching them to be humble and grateful, we can
make
sure that they do not have a future
that is
detrimental for them.
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