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The World is experiencing dramatic increase in population, this is causing problems not only for poor, underdeveloped countries, but also developed nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

The World is experiencing dramatic increase in population, this is causing problems not only for poor, underdeveloped countries, but also developed nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution. OnBDp
Wars were the major cause of decreasing in population. Despite different areas are under attacks of different countries nowadays, the last Worldwide war was nearly seven decades ego. Therefore, in the last seventy years numbers of human have increased logharitmically. Over population seems to be a problem of underdeveloped countries but it affects all the World. Different solutions have been tried to overcome this issue. For instance, China’s ‘one child policy’ which did not work properly. Because most of the families wanted to have a boy and due to the abrortion restrictions some new born baby girls were murdered. Increasing number of boys will result in unbalanced gender distribution which can cause certain crimes such as rape. This is an obvious example of uselessness of oppressive aproaches. On the other hand, education can be the golden key of this problem. Governments can educate peoples as they are young. Schools may play an active role in family planning. Every members of the society grow up with the knowladge of income-child number balance so if they can not afford they do not have babies. The most probable result of overpopulation is food shortage. Especially in underdeveloped countries starving is not a rare problem. With the help of infectious diseases such as AIDS, limited food consumption pose a threat to underage children. With proper treatments of infections those deaths can be prevented. Also, genetically modified crops, which can be harvested even in deserts, would be the solution of starvation. However, does it not mean that every baby can survive so people should have babies every year? Absolutely no. While we prevent the deaths which caused from poverty, we have to teach the contraception ways and why they are necessary. In conclusion, growing population is a rising problem. I believe education maybe helpful to stop the tremendous increasing in population rather than strict rules.
Wars were the major cause of decreasing in
population
. Despite
different
areas are under attacks of
different
countries nowadays, the last Worldwide war was
nearly
seven decades ego.
Therefore
, in the last seventy years numbers of human have increased
logharitmically
. Over
population
seems to be a
problem
of underdeveloped countries
but
it affects all the World.
Different
solutions have
been tried
to overcome this issue.
For instance
, China’s ‘one child policy’ which did not work
properly
.
Because
most of the families wanted to have a boy and due to the
abrortion
restrictions
some
new born baby girls
were murdered
. Increasing number of boys will result in unbalanced gender distribution which can cause certain crimes such as rape. This is an obvious example of uselessness of oppressive
aproaches
.
On the other hand
, education can be the golden key of this
problem
.
Governments
can educate peoples as they are young. Schools may play an active role in family planning. Every
members
of the society grow up with the
knowladge
of income-child number balance
so
if they can not afford they do not have babies. The most probable result of overpopulation is food shortage.
Especially
in underdeveloped countries starving is not a rare
problem
. With the
help
of infectious diseases such as AIDS, limited food consumption pose a threat to underage children. With proper treatments of infections those deaths can be
prevented
.
Also
,
genetically
modified crops, which can
be harvested
even in deserts, would be the solution of starvation.
However
, does it not mean that every baby can survive
so
people
should have babies every year?
Absolutely
no. While we
prevent
the deaths which caused from poverty, we
have to
teach the contraception ways and why they are necessary.
In conclusion
, growing
population
is a rising
problem
. I believe education maybe helpful to
stop
the tremendous increasing in
population
rather
than strict
rules
.
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IELTS essay The World is experiencing dramatic increase in population, this is causing problems not only for poor, underdeveloped countries, but also developed nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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