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Achange of plans while travlling

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Love. My mother has always told me that it is the most important thing, but no one tells you what to do when love abandons you. That is why I am standing in the middle of Paris, looking at nothing. It is amazing how quickly someone can fall out of love. I was having the time of my life half an hour ago, but now. . . I am on my own. My fiancée decided that now was the best time to end our relationship. We went on the trip he suggested, and now I have to return home because he has found another woman. So, what should I do? I was standing not far away when I heard a cry. Because of his dark skin, a man was insulted and beaten. Racism is something I abhor! I walked over to the people who were assaulting the poor man and gave them a piece of my mind. Of course, I did not scare them, but hopefully the cops were nearby and they got cold feet and fled. The man in front of me was attractive and friendly. He thanked me and took me out to dinner. I had a fantastic time, and by the end of the night, I had decided that I could stay in France for a little longer. After two years, he has become my husband. Paris is not known as the "City of Love" for nothing! Even though I cancelled my wedding that night, fate found a way to brighten my future.
Love
. My mother has always
told
me that it is the most
important
thing,
but
no one
tells
you what to do when
love
abandons you.
That is
why I am standing in the middle of Paris, looking at nothing. It is amazing how
quickly
someone can fall out of
love
. I was having the time of my life half an hour ago,
but
now
.
.
.
I am on my
own
. My fiancée decided that
now
was the best time to
end
our relationship. We went on the trip he suggested, and
now
I
have to
return home
because
he has found another woman.
So
, what should I do? I was standing not far away when I heard a cry.
Because
of his dark skin, a
man
was insulted
and beaten. Racism is something I abhor! I walked over to the
people
who were assaulting the poor
man
and gave them a piece of my mind.
Of course
, I did not scare them,
but
hopefully
the cops were
nearby and
they
got
cold
feet and fled. The
man
in front of me was attractive and friendly. He thanked me and took me out to dinner. I had a fantastic time, and by the
end
of the night, I had decided that I could stay in France for a
little
longer. After two years, he has become my husband. Paris is not known as the
"
City of
Love
"
for nothing!
Even though
I cancelled my wedding that night, fate found a way to brighten my future.
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