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The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 VRMQ3

The provided line graph illustrates how many shops were opened and closed in a country over a 7-year period from 2011 to 2018. Overall, both the number of shop closures and openings saw large fluctuations. Despite the fact that the number of openings was higher than closures, in the final year the number of closures surpassed the opening ones. In 2011, the number of closures and openings was 6400 and 8500, respectively; after a year, the former witnessed a dramatic decrease, and there was a moderate decline for the latter one. Between 2012 and 2014, there was a fluctuation for closures to 6500, while the number of openings registered a significant increase to roughly 6200. Although the number of openings ranked first in the initial year, after three years the number of shops which were closed overtook them. Additionally, the number of new shops decreased to the lowest point in 2015. Prior to 2018, both shops indicated a fluctuation, and in the final year closed shops were nearly 5000 and new shops at just shy of 3000.

The provided line graph illustrates how many
shops
were opened
 and closed in a country over a 7-year
 period from 2011 to 2018.

Overall
, both the number
 of shop
closures
 and openings saw
 large fluctuations. Despite the fact that the number
 of openings was higher than closures
, in the final year
 the number
 of closures
 surpassed the opening ones.

In 2011, the number
 of closures
 and openings was 6400 and 8500, respectively
; after a year
, the former witnessed a dramatic decrease, and there was a moderate decline for the latter one. Between 2012 and 2014, there was a fluctuation for closures
 to 6500, while the number
 of openings registered a significant increase to roughly 6200.

Although the number
 of openings ranked first
 in the initial year
, after three years the number
 of shops
 which were closed
 overtook them. Additionally
, the number
 of new shops
 decreased to the lowest point in 2015. Prior to 2018, both shops
 indicated a fluctuation, and in the final year
 closed shops
 were nearly
 5000 and new shops
 at just
 shy of 3000. 

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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

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