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The faulty of newspaper's magazine

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with special photoshops. As a master having 10 years of experience, I am afraid to say I have a number of complaints to your newspaper’s weekend magazine. One Sunday, after reading your magazine, I was very disappointed with my determination that several of the models have been photoshopped to make them look perfect. It's not uncommon to see pretty dramatic changes to the image coloring, the model themselves, and the background. Trying to, make things perfect is good However, did you think that it can dramatically change people’s feelings such as honesty and belief? The media can change people’s points of view about fashion by inappropriate and deceiving information. Furthermore, it can make human ideas such as "I will change my images by photoshop instead of being natural" I have to say that I was very annoyed that your paper, which normally prides itself on forward-thinking articles, should fall into the trap that less progressive magazines are keen to promote. For instance, the author of the previous magazine should give original images of points instead of photoshopped ones. I was equally upset that you did not take notes to portray a fair representation of the humans who actually inhabit this world. I do not imagine that you will fix the problem until the next week. But I would therefore be grateful if you could give us original pictures of models instead of photoshopped ones. I know you are capable of producing. Yours faithfully, Sardorbek Muhiddinov

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with special photoshops. As a master having 10 years of experience, I am afraid to say I have a number of complaints to your newspaper’s weekend magazine.

One Sunday, after reading your magazine, I was very
 disappointed with my determination that several of the models have been photoshopped
 to make
 them look perfect. It's not uncommon to see
 pretty dramatic changes
 to the image coloring, the model themselves, and the background. Trying to, make
 things perfect is good
However
, did you think
 that it can dramatically
change
people
’s feelings such as honesty and belief? The media can change
people
’s points of view about fashion by inappropriate and deceiving information. Furthermore
, it can make
 human ideas
 such as "
I will change
 my images by photoshop instead
 of being natural"


I have to
 say that I was very
 annoyed that your paper, which normally
 prides itself on forward-thinking articles, should fall into the trap that less progressive magazines are keen to promote. For instance
, the author of the previous magazine should give original images of points instead
 of photoshopped ones. I was equally
 upset that you did not take notes to portray a fair
 representation of the humans who actually inhabit this world.

I do not imagine that you will fix
 the problem until the next
 week. But
 I would therefore
 be grateful if you could give us original pictures of models instead
 of photoshopped ones. I know you are capable of producing.

Yours faithfully
,

Sardorbek
Muhiddinov

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